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A woman in a dress

Hair like a poem
Legs like a song
I watched her go by
As she walked along

Love's perfect form
Perfumed with bliss
I dreamed of her burning
My skin with her kiss

An angel of affection
A goddess of light
She walked on in search of
The treasures of night
 

— Edevold, Mar 03, 2009

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Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 3 months ago

Edevold

really good rhyming. i thought it was a very good read ~~~~~~~~~ Be whoever you are At all times, and Remember that Because of this, people will Always Respect, and Admire you ©2008Leonard Respectfully Yours, Barbara