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spring

my reasons have changed
transformed along with my circumstances
defined by those I have allowed into my life
shaping me
releasing me
and giving my days their tints and shades
to open up
and allow hatchets to fall
or portly women to sing

leave open the door
for fresh winds to blow
let the early spring's germination
lift the chin of my winter's dispossession
soothe the bruising where i once stumbled
bleary-eyed with sleep.
— crypticbard, Mar 03, 2009

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Region, Country: West Moreton, AUS

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whitetea

whitetea

17 years 2 months ago

i read this a few times

i read this a few times over. very good. i like this for its perspective you have toward others and their impact. im a bit of a word junkie and like certain words for their ability to imply something quickly. you have a lot of strong words here and i like that.