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DawningDaytripper
DawningDaytripper
Mar 03, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

When Eve tempted Adam.

When Eve tempted Adam.

Respective, Reproductive,
inventive, indecisive
indivisible, incorporative
repressive, regressive
creative, constructive
elusive, exclusive,
retentive, resistive
permissive, predictive
punitive, plaintive
reactive, relative
massive, motive
erosive, emotive
ablative, attractive
native, narrative
occlusive, obtrusive
pensive, passive
reflective, redemptive
conceive, collective
preemptive, preventive
derive, directive
active, attentive
conclusive, conducive
elective, eruptive,
ejective, explosive,
protective, perspective
totally subjective man!


Inspired by Rett's, When Adam met Eve.

Julie
D.D.
3/3/09

— DawningDaytripper, Mar 03, 2009

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Region, Country: Robe valley, WA, USA

Favorite Poets: All of them, for differant reasons. Neopoet poets have influenced me the most over the last 2 plus years. Great teachers. Edgar Allen Poe, Dickens, way to many to list...

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Rett

Rett

17 years 3 months ago

*LOL* I love it!

The Gander has been Goosed! This is terrific and I loved every word my friend. You must have had a blast writing it! Ain't it fun to play with words like that? Thanks for making my day! Respectfully, Rett: "Next time you think you're perfect, walk on water." "A Democracy can withstand anything but Democrats." Robert A. Heinlein
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Ink Dragon

17 years 3 months ago

Hi DD!

More chuckles! I have just read Rett´s piece on women, and now your witty answer! What fun! Maybe we should all write responses to other people´s poems... Yours, ~Nina
Rett

Rett

17 years 3 months ago

Nina and Double D

Nina, wasn't it a hoot? I love it when this is done in fun because I love to laugh. she did a bang up good come back and every bit as funny as I tried to be. Double D, I just read it a couple of more times early this morning so I could start the day with a laugh. It was just as good as last night! Respectfully, Rett: "Next time you think you're perfect, walk on water." "A Democracy can withstand anything but Democrats." Robert A. Heinlein
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years 3 months ago

Like the waka of old China

where someone begins a poem then sends it to the next person who adds another verse using something from the first and so on. They did it in the old courts of China to entertain themselves, it became serious and the poems became an art. Nina, that's the gist of it anyhow? Yours as aye Ann
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 3 months ago

Well Well...

These two poems should be on the same page... yours and Retts together compliment each other very well.... Richard
Rett

Rett

17 years 3 months ago

Sounds good to me Double D.

BTW, I've been meaning to talk to you about how game you are.... *tease* time for a bath... You want me to do or you. Makes no difference to me. *G* Respectfully, Rett: "Next time you think you're perfect, walk on water." "A Democracy can withstand anything but Democrats." Robert A. Heinlein