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Going Behind a Carrot

Going Behind  A Carrot

A carrot before us
as money house and car.
We go behind it 
on the lust on all to have
We loose our days and months
and our health and youth by that carrot

Our sense and wisdom go behind the seller
to have  a bit of carrot to have
It is sweet to that second  or minute
but so bitter to peace

We may sell devils to cruels 
that may ruin many lives in this earth
We may live in luxuries and comforts 
we will have to repay for all
Forget  that carrot and forget that devil
Think your soul and other souls as you
There is the way  and there is the gate 
to enjoy a limitless glee  and peace

SAKTHI S RAVICHANDRAN

 
— SAKTHEEE2007, Mar 03, 2009

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yenti

yenti

17 years 3 months ago

Carrots

This is a good write just needs a little tidy in the way each sentance is held together, with reading of other poets and writters things will be better for you, try writing first then writing again with a book of poems to reference the ways of lines and verses/stanzas, I await you next pieces, Yours Ian.T (Yenti)