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Mar 01, 2009
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Naked
When I go out in my birthday suit
All the people stop and stare
They stand with mouths wide open
But I really couldn’t care
.
I like to go out naked
And stroll about the town
And lay out in the sunshine
To get my torso brown
.
When I go out in my birthday suit
The complaining never ceases
But I like showing off my body
Even though its full of creases
.
© John W Fenn 03-02-09
— shazbat, Mar 01, 2009
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Cloudthings
17 years 3 months ago
How warm & inclusive this feels