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Naked

When I go out in my birthday suit

All the people stop and stare

They stand with mouths wide open

But I really couldn’t care

.

I like to go out naked

And stroll about the town

And lay out in the sunshine

To get my torso brown

.

When I go out in my birthday suit

The complaining never ceases

But I like showing off my body

Even though its full of creases
.

© John W Fenn  03-02-09

— shazbat, Mar 01, 2009

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Region, Country: Norfolk, UK, GBR

Favorite Poets: Kipling, T.S Eliot, Hilaire Belloc, Ogden Nash, Spike Milligan and many more.

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Cloudthings

Cloudthings

17 years 3 months ago

How warm & inclusive this feels

Heh, what fun, really enjoyed this... love the way the last line wraps it all up in such a way that reminds us all we will be heading that way some time & it's really ok... Lovely warm & fun. Thanks John Anni I wish to walk gracefully..... so as not to spill water.