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Haiku: Kiss Of a Feather

Haiku: Kiss from a Feather

Love like a feather
Flutter in the summer breeze
Soothes some of the pain

— Barbara Writes, Feb 27, 2009

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Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins, Shakespeare, , Emily Dickinson, , , Whitman, Jess Tapper

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Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 3 months ago

Daddy It Hurts

Thank you for sharing this Barbara~ ______________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous
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lyalopez

17 years 3 months ago

the truth hurts

i read this... and it got me. ive seen so many stories on child abuse. it sad and painful that someone would cause any pain physically and mentally to the most precious gift god gives us. i have two kids and the thought of anyone hurting my girls runs the blood in my viens.
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years 3 months ago

Sad indeed Barbara

We can become too complacent in our lives, running and jumping for joy at rainbows, the real gritty truth that such terror exists comes through the papers and news, we try to do our part, helping charities etc. but without much help to those far away. I am so glad of my own upbringing and value it as full of love and understanding, but one's heart goes out to those that have difficult lives, be they young, or old. I am glad that per capita Norway is a generous land to those in need. Yours Ann
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OpenCasket

17 years 3 months ago

Hmm

A torment of a cowardly self hating person. Intersting, straight foreward, and to the point. I applaude you.
docmaverick

docmaverick

17 years 3 months ago

So sorry....

...for the victims, however...I see no point in having them relive it! How many of these in a lifetime can we all bear? Especially when all that we do is, write. I truly am, so sorry for this child...but, it's becoming a pattern. Give it a rest. Yours truly, #{:>{}@=== docmaverick.
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 3 months ago

i agree

~~~~~~~~~ Be whoever you are At all times, and Remember that Because of this, people will Always Respect, and Admire you ©2008Leonard Respectfully Yours, Barbara
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 3 months ago

truth in your words

I will change the meaning in that line. thanks for suggestion I really value your opinions. ~~~~~~~~~ Be whoever you are At all times, and Remember that Because of this, people will Always Respect, and Admire you ©2008Leonard Respectfully Yours, Barbara
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

17 years 3 months ago

I like this

It's interesting to see how people interpret this from their own points of view. It can be interpreted in so many different ways, from so many different viewpoints, and that I think is the mark of a good write on a subject like this. Respectfully Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race