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Pills

My sister is popping pills
and openly
likes to mention them...
another victim of
another money chump
of the doctor's pusher grin.

She needs em
and she knows it...
and her slurry words all show it,
another way on down
I hope she's looking out
rock bottom is the pitts...

Popping pills
for those floating thrills
have you been there
have you seen
are you dreaming up some yesterdays
couldn't you learn from watching me.

Staying out of touch
from the harsher hand
of reality's gruesome grip...
clouded rings and cotton dreams
wake up...
I think you've shit.
— themoonman, Feb 27, 2009

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Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

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Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 3 months ago

Pills

Richard, Almost a way of life now, for a lot of people. Thanks for sharing this with us Moon. ______________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 3 months ago

Hi Janice

nice to see your sweet self here, thanks for reading and commenting... a way of life it is for many... and an easy thing to over-do... get used to... need thanks again Richard
yenti

yenti

17 years 3 months ago

More Pills

It is hard on most people to become a pill popper, but I guess easier when they do, Must be expensive over in the States if you have to pay for everything. Here we are a lucky nation as when you reach 65 for men or 60 for women there is no charge for medicine, so I guess that there are prob more pill poppers here. I think that if I had to pay for the pain killers I have to take, it would be my main expence. A very good write on the subject though, and will run a thought through a few minds about what they are doing, then habit will kill it dead, LOL. Yours, Ian.T
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 3 months ago

Ian...

thanks for reading and commenting... this one may just have rubbed some the wrong way which was not the intention... there are many medications that are needed and I give props to the medical association for their advances in the field, but this addresses a problem here in the U.S., so many people take pills that are prescribed for moods... and I'm not saying that they are all wrong either, but when pills alter your personality and they are meant to balance it, then, in my old opinion, it is most likely the wrong medicine... I look around sometimes and feel as if we are guinea pigs for these mood altering drugs of today... it is good that in England when you reach a certain age the medicines are free... that isn't the case here... some of our elderly resort to eating dog food in order to pay for medications needed to sustain life... maybe one day! thanks Richard
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 3 months ago

Damnit

now you got me singing it... if ya... need em and ya know it clap your hands clap clap if everyone around ya knows it clap your hands clap clap Hi there D.D. I've been on the dark side lately... Richard
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

17 years 3 months ago

brilliantly playful & still carries portent

Oh man of moonness (I am intrigued as to what that is about you know, you don't look so moon oriented to me)... I enjoyed this very much ... even when you are chastising a behaviour there is a lovely warmth & empathy, & you have such a brilliantly playful way of putting these things out there. Really like the way its written & the content. Cheers Anni I wish to walk gracefully..... so as not to spill water.
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 3 months ago

Anni...

well I really like the way you talk... thanks for reading between the lines... Richard
L

loveyu74848

17 years 3 months ago

i have had first hand

i have had first hand experiance with this myself... have been a dr.'s guinea pig... so i can relate... very good!!!
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 3 months ago

Hi loveyu....

thank you for reading and commenting, sorry about your experience, but glad you could relate... and thanks for sharing it... Richard
C

Conect11

17 years 3 months ago

oh Richard,

while the majority of this poem was a brilliant, and emotionally detached confessional piece, the third stanza crushed me and broke my heart, it was so surreal, yet so urgent and reminded me deeply of my sister, who was kept on Thorazine for much of her childhood. I felt pained by this poem, you wrote an emotional hammer - stroke without once having to raise your voice, increase your tempo, or smear gobs of sentimentality. Mark W. "our hope is in the living God, who is the Savior of all people and particularly of all believers." 1 Timothy 4:10
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 3 months ago

Mark...

I don't know what to say to that... I am sorry this hit so close as to bring up terrible memories for you... I can remember a time when all you had to do was act a little off in public and the result would be a trip to Thorazine land... It is better now but sometimes the results are quite similar... I thank you again for your insight as a reader and your elegance in commentary... no wonder you write so well! thanks Richard
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 3 months ago

D.D.

thank you for coming back clap clap!!!!
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 3 months ago

Hi Janice

thank you for reading and commenting... means a lot to me! Richard
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 3 months ago

D.D.

No, I wasn't offended in the least bit...no need to apologize my friend, it is indeed a serious matter but I thank you for seeing the funny side... I smile every time I read it now... Richard
O

orgami

17 years 3 months ago

Sorry Richard for not commenting right away

In the nineteen eighties it was still the dark ages for mood order meds up here its covered by OHIP or most of them otherwise I wouldnt be able to be medicated and probably be dead it took me awhile to get the right amounts to work for me I remember the time I broke out in hives like badly but I didnt care if I lived or died then yes its so easy to get too much medication your poem graphically and well written adress's a problem of this kind of dependence and abuse and you feel what so many do in watching the effects Helpless I took too many pills and I've fallen and I cant get up Not a joke and the medications also that do help take a pounding on the other organs like the liver or the heart or kidneys Make a person swell up and gain weight because it makes you hungry some of these pills slows metabolism down from the highs of mania for instance so one can sleep and these are the modernist drugs its no wonder people go off meds though its either the wilds or the zombielands and then the "who the hell am I " after awhile Im glad I found a good clinic and a clinician whos great and meds that work despite weight gain Great poem Richard for adressing this
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 3 months ago

Orgami...

Thank you for sharing with us here so generously some of the side effects of meds today, besides the one I mention, the over-medicating that is done at times by patients as well as doctors. It is good you found a clinician who would take the time to find the correct meds for your situation, not all of them will do that. thanks again for reading and commenting... Richard
Rett

Rett

17 years 3 months ago

Richard, I get it my friend

Some meds are needed such as mine for heart, cholesterol, gout and RA. I also take darvocett when it gets to be too much pain to handle without help, but a 30 day supply last me for 3-4 months. I have a sister in law I can't even tell I have them or she will "accidentally" hurt herself and need 3 or 4 before she can get to the doctor. When she comes over we have to hide our meds or she will steal some of them. A prescription pain pill junkie. I stopped the weed, acid, mescaline, peyote many years ago at 20 years old for family was more important. Excellent write my friend. Even the last line says it all! Respectfully, Rett: "Next time you think you're perfect, walk on water." "A Democracy can withstand anything but Democrats." Robert A. Heinlein
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 3 months ago

Rett...

that is it exactly, and it is easy enough to become addicted to the fuzzy feelings associated with pain medications, mood pills like valume,xanyx and the whole array of todays selection. We have to hide anything that says "may cause drowsiness" thanks for reading and commenting Rett Richard
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Mike5242

17 years 2 months ago

Addiction Acknowledged

Yoh Moonman I'm mentioning this publicly coz i left my problems behind a long time ago i used to do cocaine and south african made drug called Kat and E and mix them all together for the hell of it i was in a deep deep dark place depression left me to rot i fortunately had the inner strength to pull myself out of the hole i dug myself deeply into ... tho now to clarify i have to take pills to fix my psyche and i take anti dep in the morning anti anxiety in the evening and sleeping pills at night(as due to the other drugs my sleeping patterns were destroyed). coz im litterally nuts with out em and they've fixed me i am slowly comming off them weening .. alls i want you to know nothing and no one but yourself can pull you away and out of that dark passengers riggamortis grip only the person afflicted can help them selves clearly your poem struct a deeply sensitive nerve with me and i felt i needed to share the side of the afflicted story
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 2 months ago

Mike...

sorry for the late response to your comment... I've been computerless for awhile so I'm trying to catch up on missed comments. Addictions... whew man, you had a terrible one from the sound of it... glad you kicked it. I hope this poem of mine didn't rub you the wrong way, many drugs are needed and if used the correct way can be very helpful in righting some of our afflictions. When I wrote this poem, my sister's doctor was over-medicating her to the extent of not being able to function, and she liked it so much, she took even more of the pills which would put her in a state of unawareness to the fullest degree. Actually, she is doing much better right now... thank you for sharing your plight with addiction, sometimes it helps just to know it is out there. I myself have been addicted to cocaine before, back in the day, it is a powerfully addictive drug and you never get off like the first time that day, the rest of the day is chasing that first high... until you are miserable and broke... yes, I've been there too. Richard
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JoJo

17 years 2 months ago

Addiction

I believe addiction affects everyone (even with boasting the crime rates, with home invations and all). We must keep talking about it, educating on it and prayer is always appropriate, in my book (of life). enjoyed the poem, a real dose of reality.
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 2 months ago

Hi JoJo...

glad you liked it... and I think you are right with attributing many of todays crimes with addictions, but I also think that addiction is part of the human genome and it's really a matter of what we are addicted to... as in writing, or working out, or reading... there are many things that are good to be stuck on... thanks for reading... Richard
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JoJo

17 years 2 months ago

100 % Correct

Richard you are right-on with that one. Believe me when i say i know the dope dance WELL! I know that's why God gave me the oppertunity to do that type of work for over twenty five years. But mind ya i was a beautiful intelligent and business minded drug addict. Yea Right! That kind of thinking kept me sick for a hell-of a long time. I celebrated 32 years on July 5,2008. ONE day at a time. I really need an addiction to exercise because the cute little tight ass, no longer exist. Thanks for letting me share! Smiles.
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 2 months ago

Thank you JoJo...

Anytime you want to share it will be heard here... I was a functioning addict as well... probably why it lasted as long as it did... Your 33'rd anniversary is coming up! and Hey, everyone can't have those cute little asses, we wouldn't recognize it anymore... lol... loved that comment of yours... Richard