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Feb 27, 2009
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Pills
My sister is popping pills
and openly
likes to mention them...
another victim of
another money chump
of the doctor's pusher grin.
She needs em
and she knows it...
and her slurry words all show it,
another way on down
I hope she's looking out
rock bottom is the pitts...
Popping pills
for those floating thrills
have you been there
have you seen
are you dreaming up some yesterdays
couldn't you learn from watching me.
Staying out of touch
from the harsher hand
of reality's gruesome grip...
clouded rings and cotton dreams
wake up...
I think you've shit.
and openly
likes to mention them...
another victim of
another money chump
of the doctor's pusher grin.
She needs em
and she knows it...
and her slurry words all show it,
another way on down
I hope she's looking out
rock bottom is the pitts...
Popping pills
for those floating thrills
have you been there
have you seen
are you dreaming up some yesterdays
couldn't you learn from watching me.
Staying out of touch
from the harsher hand
of reality's gruesome grip...
clouded rings and cotton dreams
wake up...
I think you've shit.
— themoonman, Feb 27, 2009
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Critiques
Janice Pearce
17 years 3 months ago
Pills
themoonman
17 years 3 months ago
Hi Janice
yenti
17 years 3 months ago
More Pills
themoonman
17 years 3 months ago
Ian...
themoonman
17 years 3 months ago
Damnit
Cloudthings
17 years 3 months ago
brilliantly playful & still carries portent
themoonman
17 years 3 months ago
Anni...
loveyu74848
17 years 3 months ago
i have had first hand
themoonman
17 years 3 months ago
Hi loveyu....
Conect11
17 years 3 months ago
oh Richard,
themoonman
17 years 3 months ago
Mark...
themoonman
17 years 3 months ago
D.D.
themoonman
17 years 3 months ago
Hi Janice
themoonman
17 years 3 months ago
D.D.
orgami
17 years 3 months ago
Sorry Richard for not commenting right away
themoonman
17 years 3 months ago
Orgami...
Rett
17 years 3 months ago
Richard, I get it my friend
themoonman
17 years 3 months ago
Rett...
Mike5242
17 years 2 months ago
Addiction Acknowledged
themoonman
17 years 2 months ago
Mike...
JoJo
17 years 2 months ago
Addiction
themoonman
17 years 2 months ago
Hi JoJo...
JoJo
17 years 2 months ago
100 % Correct
themoonman
17 years 2 months ago
Thank you JoJo...