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Feb 27, 2009
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Darkness claims me
Darkness claims me
This silent monster crept up slowly
Not seen and neither heard
And suddenly took over all emotions
Leaving one losing all control
Unwillingly giving in to daily darkness
Darkness that constantly beckons
Darkness that is a very real threat
To all sanity that one has left
One awakens and sees the light
Feeling like there day will truly take flight
Yet, one misspoken word
One misplaced action
Not always intentionally inflicted
Causes the darkness to chuckle with sick glee
For it knows, it has taken effect once again
Causing that deep, crippling fear and pain
Darkness that reaches out and takes hold
Its cold fingers gripping and smothering
An already scarred and wounded soul
Leaving the tears to freely flow
When will the darkness stop taking such pleasure?
At truly taking over at its own leisure
When will light once again be called friend?
When will this mind consuming, shattering pain reach its final end?
I pray that it is not too late for a soul so lost
For, the edge is very real, very there
So the time has come to constantly fight
And always be painfully alert and aware
— Feebie, Feb 27, 2009
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Ink Dragon
17 years 3 months ago
Dear Feebie,