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Beneath Her Skin

“She is no one in particular, but in general so many. She has learned so well to hide her pains, to ignore her tears, to close her in herself.” Burnt skin has, Healed and cured. Fading bronze lines, Now mark her skin. Beneath her skin; The pain, the hurt, That rots and sizzles, Torments into the night. She is determined. To hold a straight face; To twist her lips, To justify her smile. She learns so well. She hides, carelessly Brushing away her tears; Her forever branded soul. So hard she tries, To save her, In vain, pushing, dragging, Deceiving, from herself.

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yenti

yenti

17 years 1 month ago

Pragyan

This is a very good write and it was quite deep in its feelings that were running through I hope others take the time to read it, just the word Vane, I think it should be Vain, otherwise a lovely write, Yours Ian.T
Pragyan

Pragyan

17 years 1 month ago

Ian

Thank you so much to point out the mistake. I did not see that before. Thank you for your kind appreciation too. Regards Pragyan.
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MeanderS

17 years ago

powerful

...so closely understood...beautifully captured..
Seren

Seren

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Pragyan

This has absolutely gobsmacked me ... you write how i feel ... this could ahve been about me ...(in another lifetime) scary lol love and (huggles)
Pragyan

Pragyan

16 years 4 months ago

Scary indeed!!!

Sounds scary of course. But it's really good to know that after all it was not all that fictitious, my theme I mean. Thank you Love and regards Pragyan.