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Pragyan
Pragyan
Feb 26, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Feather

Detached from a shared consciousness, Parted from a dove’s tail, Giving up an aimed flight, Drifting slowly... slowly... Memories of shared conscience. Now only uncertainties of abyss. Air that carries me, Whispers to me ageless stories. Drifting downward, catching Wind with my body. Blown to halt with a sigh, I rest on a windowsill; Before I fly.

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faerybeki

faerybeki

17 years 2 months ago

Interesting theme, to

Interesting theme, to personify the feather, and an enjoyable read! liked the idea of the air whispering ageless stories to the feather as it falls. Take care b x
Pragyan

Pragyan

17 years 2 months ago

Hi...

Thank you for your kindness and for reading my poetry. Regards Pragyan.
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MeanderS

17 years ago

paper-boat

lovely, i m sure somwhere my poems , esp. d use of few wrds have been inspired frm ur tremendously influential poetry.. carry on like a feather...frm feather to feather..