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Ones and Twos are your teens

Ones and Twos are your teens

 

Ten and one was my childhood done
Ten and two came without a clue
Ten and three is what is ask of me
Ten and four there are choices with doors
Ten and five this is the beginning of pride
Ten and six are things I cannot fix
Ten and seven were words only answered by heaven
Ten and eight began my choices of mistakes
For I was legally I man now
Ten and nine I was judged in my farther mind
Now two and one are all what my teens have become

Pressley Hambrick

— press, Feb 23, 2009

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yenti

yenti

17 years 3 months ago

Press

this one was a little non, but I think with a bit of rearranging of ages and a bit inbetween it will make it, not one to my liking but that's just me, Yours Ian.T
press

press

17 years 3 months ago

Something different

This was something new I tried to expand my poems and what I write about I am leaning