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Feb 22, 2009
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Moon beams {You may have a poet mention, please read folks}
Inspiration comes in many forms quick and fierce as if from a storm.Thankful I am to be here today, looking for knowledge along the way.
I asked the Man in the moon for his advice he smiled and said "It's a toss of the dice."
"Why might you ask me your earthy question's, what makes you think I may have a suggestion?"
Because you must see it all, from your round luminescent ball.Surely you know what I mean, you have the best view of the scene.
"Maybe you should ask your Paw, he is one of the wisest I have ever saw.Or maybe the dwarf might know, She has infinite wisdom ready to go."
Good suggestion, I can not disagree. Their patience and time is great testimony.
"Janice or Eduardo may have your clue."
That's all fine and dandy but I am asking you.
"Amartya Ray could probably save the day,"
Yes, he shines his light and has his way.
"Bright is the neon soul of electric blue, Dark purple has a different shade and hue.Ann would surely have what you need, the proprietress and her can shape a read.Plus Lonnie always' Love's to please and play,"
I can not argue with anything you say.
"So why do you think that I am the one, why don't you ask my brother the Sun."
If they had my answer I surely would, I know they would help me if they could.But you are the only one who can truly see...
How do the moon beams look shining down on me?
:-) He-he
Thanks for being such a great friend this week Moonman, can you tell I appreciate how much you have cared!I just couldn't quite get a poem out about my "Wonder dog." D.D. 2/22/2009
I asked the Man in the moon for his advice he smiled and said "It's a toss of the dice."
"Why might you ask me your earthy question's, what makes you think I may have a suggestion?"
Because you must see it all, from your round luminescent ball.Surely you know what I mean, you have the best view of the scene.
"Maybe you should ask your Paw, he is one of the wisest I have ever saw.Or maybe the dwarf might know, She has infinite wisdom ready to go."
Good suggestion, I can not disagree. Their patience and time is great testimony.
"Janice or Eduardo may have your clue."
That's all fine and dandy but I am asking you.
"Amartya Ray could probably save the day,"
Yes, he shines his light and has his way.
"Bright is the neon soul of electric blue, Dark purple has a different shade and hue.Ann would surely have what you need, the proprietress and her can shape a read.Plus Lonnie always' Love's to please and play,"
I can not argue with anything you say.
"So why do you think that I am the one, why don't you ask my brother the Sun."
If they had my answer I surely would, I know they would help me if they could.But you are the only one who can truly see...
How do the moon beams look shining down on me?
:-) He-he
Thanks for being such a great friend this week Moonman, can you tell I appreciate how much you have cared!I just couldn't quite get a poem out about my "Wonder dog." D.D. 2/22/2009
— DawningDaytripper, Feb 22, 2009
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themoonman
17 years 3 months ago
Julie...
yenti
17 years 3 months ago
Moon Beams they are
themoonman
17 years 3 months ago
Julie...
Ink Dragon
17 years 3 months ago
Hi DD,
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 3 months ago
Julie,
Electric Blue
17 years 3 months ago
Moon Beams
infinite_dwarf
17 years 3 months ago
Double D
Proprietress o…
17 years 3 months ago
this is a wonderful poem.
Nordic cloud
17 years 3 months ago
You honour us
Rett
17 years 3 months ago
Double D
themoonman
17 years 3 months ago
Ain't she sweet
Rett
17 years 3 months ago
*LOL* I sound like an UZI when I get up
Seren
17 years ago
Julie
Skumpfsklub
17 years ago
(chuckling)
Candlewitch
17 years ago
Hello
Nordic cloud
17 years ago
How greatly I apologise to the Sister of the Sun