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Feb 22, 2009
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Pitch Black Walk Back in 1999, inspired by Jess K. (Infinite_Dwarf)
Pitch Black Walk Back in 1999
I tried walking home
from a house I didn't want to be;
scratch that, no,
a yard, among the tall grass and green weeds
of Tremont.
One in the morning in the industrial flats
is no place for a young man.
The smoke stacks and rust colored red bricks
rise like Dracula's castle,
there's murder on these streets.
If I had a gun
I'd be afraid to use it;
no one is down here,
even the homeless men fled this area
more than half a century ago.
Still, I feel... something.
The Devil's in this place,
when I finally get out
onto Fulton road
it's in front of a cemetary.
(How appropriate)
Still, I feel safer.
Another five blocks
and I'm at my little bachelor pad
in Ohio City.
— Conect11, Feb 22, 2009
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Kailashana
17 years 3 months ago
Is it strange that we can
LissaMine
17 years 3 months ago
I felt the fear
themoonman
17 years 3 months ago
Mark...
infinite_dwarf
17 years 3 months ago
Spooky