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Pitch Black Walk Back in 1999, inspired by Jess K. (Infinite_Dwarf)

Pitch Black Walk Back in 1999

I tried walking home
from a house I didn't want to be;
scratch that, no,
a yard, among the tall grass and green weeds
of Tremont.

One in the morning in the industrial flats
is no place for a young man.

The smoke stacks and rust colored red bricks
rise like Dracula's castle,
there's murder on these streets.

If I had a gun
I'd be afraid to use it;
no one is down here,
even the homeless men fled this area
more than half a century ago.
Still, I feel... something.

The Devil's in this place,
when I finally get out
onto Fulton road
it's in front of a cemetary.
(How appropriate)
Still, I feel safer.

Another five blocks
and I'm at my little bachelor pad
in Ohio City.

— Conect11, Feb 22, 2009

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Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 3 months ago

Is it strange that we can

Is it strange that we can sense past/future events? Not really, we are after all, the human *animal* and most of us has learned to tune things out. Glad you made it home safely. I have many stories about saving my life by listening to my internal guide. Much love. ~Ann "We have to try to get rid of the notion of time. And when you have an intense contact of love with nature or another human being, like a spark, then you understand that there is no time and that everything is eternal." Paulo Coelho
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LissaMine

17 years 3 months ago

I felt the fear

I was holding my breath reading this one. Nice job! I hold it true, whatever befall; I feel it, when I sorrow most; 'Tis better to have loved and lost Than never to have loved at all.
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 3 months ago

Mark...

a scary walk home... spooky when you are all alone in the dark of night...at least, you hope you are alone... ooohhhh! Relieved by the cemetery... cool... loved the feelings expressed in this one, and glad you made it home. Richard
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 3 months ago

Spooky

What did I do to inspire this one? This poem reminds me of the book The Monster Of Florence, by Douglas Preston. I got some major chills reading both that book, and this poem. Well done. ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- -"Three things that take forever to get here: birthday, Christmas, and the pizza delivery boy." - Garfield the Cat