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The art in life

How many times 
They say life imitates art?
Is how many times 
I can show another broken heart?
Many times ,I have seen
Our trust
Our love
Broken , a blank screen

Where is this beauty
Where is the art?
My picture is framed
With broken parts
I see no beauty ?
I see no art ?


— press, Feb 20, 2009

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yenti

yenti

17 years 3 months ago

Press

A good portrate of a feeling and searching for new ones, am not sure why your poems are not commented on, I think they warrant a word or two, try talking to some of the others on the site and just ask for opinion, Yours Ian.T