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THE SEDUCTION OF EVE

  THE SEDUCTION OF EVE[The beginnings] The serpent silently steals Along the silvery shore Of the river bank, Seeking the desire of his seduction, Eve, Eve, he whispers. Stop a while And Listen to what I have to say. Why look at me that way. Am I not one of the creatures He has made As well. Only good comes out of this Garden. You are His favorite you know. More pleasing to the sight Than all His creations, Even The angels sing your name with His In praise of your loveliness.  Your beauty has no equal here And He too envies your perfection. Oh, Eve, Eve I love the way you smile. Come. Stay a while. I have something to say To you.