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Quetch

Tendril wafted dunes
of barren sands waffle,  
swirl across mile
upon mile in every direction-
your face appears a horizon away,
there is little comfort found
in accompanying echoes.


Drifting sticks
wail in the pitched wind,
stretched on distant recollection-
stylus of the scribe named Regret;
each flurrying breeze
turns a new page,
taking with it freshly shed tears.


Foetid droppings
of some wastrel desert vagabond
provide a vivid reminder
of how it can never be again,
to kick it away
would only contaminate
these well worn wandering shoes.


Head facing forward
wherever the nose points
except in the back of the mind
where the oasis burbles-
each leafy frond conceals
intimate moments now buried
within the unmindful desert's gut.

— crypticbard, Feb 19, 2009

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Region, Country: West Moreton, AUS

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yenti

yenti

17 years 3 months ago

Crypticbard

No wonder you are Crypticbard, it is a place of beauty you portray, and to see it is to really feel its beauty in the ripples and swirls forever changing, this can so easily be a person of depth that changes so to not let you see the real person. There are a load of pure white sand dunes out in the country in South Africa and they are isolated and moving where to we know not, if they ever arrive we will never know, Yours Ian.T
Frederick Kesner

Frederick Kesner

17 years 2 months ago

Quetch

Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts on ‘Quetch.’ It is by far the best interpretation of said poem. I cannot put into words how grateful I am that you have shared quite straightforwardly how the poem engaged you. Again, many thanks.