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Dover

Dover My eleventh grade psych teacher,Wayne Petteck, had served asan Army Chaplain in the Vietnam War.Wayne served stateside in Cleveland.At the end of class one dayhe recounted the worst war story he had. A young soldier had been killedbehind enemy lines.Wayne's job was to inform the boy's mother,and arrange a proper burial. Like all soldiers killed in the line of dutythe kid's remains were flown on a C - 130and unloaded at Doverdown a gently sloped ramp,to be accompanied to a waiting hearseby the gloved hands of an honor guard. The boy's motherreceived a letter from her sonpostmarked two days after his death.Because of this she held out hopethat there had been a misunderstanding. Wayne told herthere was no mistake.Her boy had stepped on a land minein front of his entire platoon.Still, she believed. The morning of the funeralthe mother was hysterical,understandably.She insisted that she open the casketand see her son's body;just to be sure. Mr. Petteck, officer Petteckbegged her not to,he told her to remember her sonin the good times.She threatened to open the coffin herself,so Wayne compromised.He offered to view her son's body,and if he was presentable,the woman would be called into the room.To this, she relented. Wayne Petteck,US Army Chaplain Wayne Petteckgently undid the latch on the coffin,and opened the lid. Inside was a picture,a neatly folded uniform,and a rubberized bag,no larger than you could put a sandwich in.In the bag was a fragment, like cooked meat, about two inches or so in diameter. Obviously unidentifiable. Wayne did the most sensitive thing he could;he lied through his teeth.""Yes, your son is in the casket. Yes, I could tell it was him. But he's really banged up, you should remember him as he was." The young man's mother was finally satisfied,and went hometo a childless house.
— Conect11, Feb 18, 2009

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themoonman

themoonman

17 years 3 months ago

Mark...

you are quite the story-teller... I'm sure the young man's Mom needed that little lie in order to bury her son, in her mind as well... sad write my friend told very well... you captured the officer's heart wrenching role so well... Richard
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Conect11

17 years 3 months ago

Thanks Richard,

your comments always mean alot to me. Mr. Petteck was one of, if not the best teacher I ever had. I don't think I ever met a person so sensitive and giving. I agree with you, that woman needed the lie he told. I think in this, and in certain circumstances a lie might be the more honest thing to do, if that makes sense. Mark W. Proverbs 27:6 "Wounds from a sincere friend are better than many kisses from an enemy."
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LissaMine

17 years 3 months ago

Your poem gave me shivers

It also reminded me of that Toby Keith song And I will always do my duty, no matter what the price, I've counted up the cost, I know the sacrifice, Oh, and I don't want to die for you, But if dying's asked of me, I'll bear that cross with honor, 'Cause freedom don't come free. God Bless American Soldiers
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Conect11

17 years 3 months ago

Thank you Lisa

God bless the soldiers indeed, and pray too, for our enemies. I haven't heard that song, I will try to check it out. Mark W. Proverbs 27:6 "Wounds from a sincere friend are better than many kisses from an enemy."
Mark

Mark

17 years 3 months ago

Man o Man

Stunned! If I could ever summarize the sum, I would retire and grow tangerines. Mark
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Conect11

17 years 3 months ago

you and your tangerines!

I'm begining to think they're code for "I hate your guts, Wilson!" lol Thank you so much for reading this, Mark. Mark W. Proverbs 27:6 "Wounds from a sincere friend are better than many kisses from an enemy."
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 3 months ago

Mark

My tears of laughter from one of your comments just turned to tears of sadness. This is a quite moving poem - and I agree with the concencus; there are just some things that people don't need to know. Excellent job. ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- -"As you slide down the banister of life, may the splinters never point in the wrong direction!" -"God is good, but never dance in a small boat."
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Conect11

17 years 3 months ago

thanks Jess,

this man, and woman went through alot; but perhaps neither as much as the young man who gave his life. Mark W. "our hope is in the living God, who is the Savior of all people and particularly of all believers." 1 Timothy 4:10