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Feb 18, 2009
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Hamster
Somebody’s stolen my hamster
It was there when I went up to bed
My sister is sitting there laughing
And saying my hamster is dead
.
She thinks that it’s ever so funny
That Hammy keeled over and died
Then she showed me where Hammy was buried
And I fell to my knees and I cried
.
The tears only lasted a minute
When a thought entered into my head
If my hamster has gone up to heaven
Can I have a new puppy instead ?
© John W Fenn 16-02-2009
— shazbat, Feb 18, 2009
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skogsbergh
17 years 3 months ago
Very fun poem! Nicely
shazbat
17 years 3 months ago
Glad you liked it, thanks
themoonman
17 years 3 months ago
John...
shazbat
17 years 3 months ago
Its nice to know it made you
KambateSpike
17 years 3 months ago
This piece is really cute.
shazbat
17 years 3 months ago
Thanks for reading, glad it