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Superman

My dad told me when he was young

And fit as fit could be

As the best Saharan lumberjack

He cut down every tree

He rode a wild dinosaur

From York to Timbuctu

He took it back to London

And put it in the Zoo

Then later on in World War two

The German horde he beat

With just his trusty penknife

He forced them to retreat

He's swam the Indian ocean

Ate crocodiles for tea

Paddled up Niagara falls

And still got home by three

When I tell of fathers exploits

Friends give me such a ribbing

They say his tales are tall ones

And that my dad is fibbing

But, I know my dads not lying

There is no way he can

I know my dads not lying

He's a real life Superman

© John W Fenn 14-02-2009

— shazbat, Feb 17, 2009

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Region, Country: Norfolk, UK, GBR

Favorite Poets: Kipling, T.S Eliot, Hilaire Belloc, Ogden Nash, Spike Milligan and many more.

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shazbat

shazbat

17 years 3 months ago

Thank you so much for your

Thank you so much for your kind comments, I am very pleased that you enjoyed this one, as for being published, it's not something I had really considered, I have only been writing since September last year and I write mainly to amuse myself, hopefully when my grandchildren are old enough to read my little ditties will keep them amused too. Once again thank you for your most welcome comment. Regards John
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Hannah illiterate

17 years 3 months ago

Wow! This is very

Wow! This is very interesting. I love how you use you words, and how you put yourself inside it.
shazbat

shazbat

17 years 3 months ago

Hannah, glad you liked it,

Hannah, glad you liked it, my dad always came out with stories like these when i was a kid, and to be honest he's nearly 90 now and he's still the same. Thanks for reading. Regards John
JL

Jo Latimer

17 years 3 months ago

John

From what I've read, I think you'll probably be the same! I'm sure your grandkids will love them.
shazbat

shazbat

17 years 3 months ago

My grandkids are a bit young

My grandkids are a bit young yet, but, I must admit that I told my own children one or two stories that were embroidered just a little, thanks for reading Jo. Regards John
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 10 months ago

Oh Shaz, this one is really

Oh Shaz, this one is really snazzy, adorable and if you would, give your dad a hug from me. All kids should have a dad they think is superman. That means they're present and they tell stories... (even if they're a bit tall ;-) (Saharan lumberjack my chainsaw--or is THAT why it's a desert now?) ~A p.s. My grandson will be 21 this year, I was a grandma at 42. Yikes! "Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood." T. S. Eliot
shazbat

shazbat

16 years 10 months ago

My dad always told us tall

My dad always told us tall tales when we were kids, to be honest he still does, he will be 88 in a couple of weeks and he's still as bright as a button, I will certainly pass on your hugs, although, I must warn you that, dad has an entourage of lady friends and is never short of a hug or two. John
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 10 months ago

I’m sure, John… I’m

I'm sure, John... I'm quite certain of that. His son probably follows in the same footsteps though I think he has a short chain... rofl...yanked by long-suffering wife,. ;-) ~A "Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood." T. S. Eliot
shazbat

shazbat

16 years 10 months ago

Yvonne Its a pleasure

Yvonne Its a pleasure receiving comments like this, thank you for taking the time to read and comment on this Regards John