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Feb 17, 2009
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Superman
My dad told me when he was young
And fit as fit could be
As the best Saharan lumberjack
He cut down every tree
He rode a wild dinosaur
From York to Timbuctu
He took it back to London
And put it in the Zoo
Then later on in World War two
The German horde he beat
With just his trusty penknife
He forced them to retreat
He's swam the Indian ocean
Ate crocodiles for tea
Paddled up Niagara falls
And still got home by three
When I tell of fathers exploits
Friends give me such a ribbing
They say his tales are tall ones
And that my dad is fibbing
But, I know my dads not lying
There is no way he can
I know my dads not lying
He's a real life Superman
© John W Fenn 14-02-2009
— shazbat, Feb 17, 2009
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shazbat
17 years 3 months ago
Thank you so much for your
Hannah illiterate
17 years 3 months ago
Wow! This is very
shazbat
17 years 3 months ago
Hannah, glad you liked it,
Jo Latimer
17 years 3 months ago
John
shazbat
17 years 3 months ago
My grandkids are a bit young
Kailashana
16 years 10 months ago
Oh Shaz, this one is really
Kailashana
16 years 10 months ago
Oh Shaz, this one is really
shazbat
16 years 10 months ago
My dad always told us tall
Kailashana
16 years 10 months ago
I’m sure, John… I’m
Yvonne D
16 years 10 months ago
A pleasure to read. Thanks…
shazbat
16 years 10 months ago
Yvonne Its a pleasure