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The Endless conversation...

A snicker and a smile,
slowly approaching life
from behind.

What are you doing,
Death asked its brother
Life?

I am bathing in the glory
of the living, Life answers.

Bathing?
What an interesting analogy,
that one could bathe in the
living?

Death,
You can not see how the
beauty of the living pours
down over me like a gentle
rain,

that washes away all my
(life's) misery -  flowing into a
river, carrying it away from me!

You speak of the living
my brother life, as if they were
our four cousins, that replenish
in the rains and breezes of the
Spring,

No!!
Once the living are in my grip,
when you have relinquished
your pleasure, there is no return
on Beltane!! (May Day)

Brother Death,
I do understand, I am enjoying
the living in their moment,
that is NOW!!

The living are but a blink of my
eye, and with each blink the living
are refreshed.

Life,
You do not understand, with each
blinking of your eye, is where I
stand, cleaning the mess you have
left behind.

Then brother Death we are in
agreement, that like the wind this
cycle will never end.

Yes we are, I will always be in the
shadow of your pleasure!!

— Eduardo Cruz, Feb 16, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: New York City, N.Y. Spanish Harlem, USA

Favorite Poets: P. Neruda, Jose de Diego, E. Dickenson, R. Frost, there are many more, but these had the greatest influence...

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Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 3 months ago

Janice,

thank you so very much!! I happy you enjoyed it! Eddie OXOX Life is like a railroad track that leads to many junctures, if you stand on the track Love comes speeding along and runs you over!! Splat!!!!
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 3 months ago

Lonnie,

thanks for the awesome!! Bravo on your Monkey poem! thanks, Eddie Life is like a railroad track that leads to many junctures, if you stand on the track Love comes speeding along and runs you over!! Splat!!!!
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 3 months ago

Eddie

My only suggestion is to put an 'e' on 'bath' in the 4th stanza. I found this poem to be most entertaining! ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- -"As you slide down the banister of life, may the splinters never point in the wrong direction!" -"God is good, but never dance in a small boat."
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 3 months ago

Look!

it's the old married couple!! My pleasure to entertain you. I've had those splinters get me once in a while. A little sand paper always seems to work on the next go round. (reparation done to fourth stanza) thanks, Eddie Life is like a railroad track that leads to many junctures, if you stand on the track Love comes speeding along and runs you over!! Splat!!!!
Rett

Rett

17 years 3 months ago

I enjoyed this a lot Eddie

Life and Death are two sides of the whole. Just like Good and Evil, you can't appreciate one without the other. Perhaps as Piers Anthony wrote in his Incarnations of Immortality series, that should be spelled this way.. GOoD and dEVIL. All things must follow the cycle. Well written, good subject and very thought provoking. Respectfully, Rett: "Next time you think you're perfect, walk on water." If government is the answer, it's a stupid question!
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 3 months ago

Rett,

how their you put up a picture of me and then call me a "GEEZER". the nerve of you, old fart! LOL I love that shot of the geezer crossing!! For sure these are thoughts of Piers Anthony. thanks for the "well written" Eddie Life is like a railroad track that leads to many junctures, if you stand on the track Love comes speeding along and runs you over!! Splat!!!!
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 3 months ago

thanks,

for calling this a "jewel" I'm taken aback by your comment! thank you for stopping by to read! Eddie Life is like a railroad track that leads to many junctures, if you stand on the track Love comes speeding along and runs you over!! Splat!!!!