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Message in a Bottle

Sinister hands shroud the face of the sun;
ordinary people walk in shadows—
communicate in unexpected ways.                   

Are they so innocent, those who walk in a daze?

One fears to speak out loud unspeakable
things, but sadly true nevertheless; hearts
press hard into telepathic service.          

Rest in truthfulness and not in vain lip service.
 
Football has now passed Jesus in the polls.
Woe to the child caught unawares; perverts
 pardoned due to unreasonable doubt.

Madness becomes inflamed when evil prowls about.

Words gush like water, brackish with gray lies;
unscience, cooler than truth nowadays, 
five o’clock rock stars live their heydays. 

 A fact may be blown up for political plays.

Politicians may think themselves funny; 
and alas, they are a bloody riot—
waiting to happen in neighborhood streets.

Gone are days when the citizen vote bought the seats.

Splashed on covers, unconstrained streams of ink
muddy open minds on wasted paper;   
hates bellow between the high sounding lines.

Eyes do not plainly see, nor do ears hear the signs.

In the wilderness, voices cry to God; 
reason calls out over magnetic waves
to brothers who hide in anonymity.

Distant brain waves sent, need no close proximity.

Uneasy souls shout while grave hearts listen. 
Come over here, my dear, rest for a while: 
Time is up; and time takes no prisoners.  

Dread, quite out of control, is beyond reasoning.

Messages wash up on ocean beaches 
in trusty old bottles, some float ashore—
hang-in, they say; fear not, though time grows short.

Once in a while such messages of hope exhort.

We will fine-tune our skills of discernment;
hear with tender ears of the inner child;
and give to others the grace they desire.

Now it is time to tap into heavenly wires.
— deelilah, Feb 15, 2009

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Region, Country: Northwest USA, USA

Favorite Poets: E.E. Cummings, Robert W. Service, Emily Dickenson

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Critiques

themoonman

themoonman

17 years 3 months ago

Deelilah...

Wow... this was a fantastic read... so much to comment on... I love the way it's done, with the powerful rhyming separate sentences... worked very well for the reader... Rest in truthfulness and not in vain lip service... wow, I love that line... this poem of yours sent chills up my spine as I read... forcing me into comment. Richard
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prayersbyPatty

17 years 3 months ago

Dee

I agree with moon on this one, I liked the one line after the stanza. And this is the state of the world. I am sorry it is this way. I get more pleasure out of the little things. I see you are of like mind. Patty
deelilah

deelilah

17 years 3 months ago

Thank you Richard and Patty

I'm glad you liked the poem. I wondered if anyone would catch the acrostic in it. Check it out. See if you can find it. Yours, Dee
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barbsdad2003

17 years 3 months ago

Impressive

You tie it all together so well. And then top it off with the acrostic intermix. A work of art. A comment on the modern day. A bow to biblical perspective. Nicely formed, then wrapped. For To doff my hat, I myself Must surely bow. Thanx, Chuck
deelilah

deelilah

17 years 2 months ago

Thank you Chuck

Somehow I missed this comment. Wow. Thanks. This is indeed high praise. Yours, Deelilah