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My Appeal to her

My Appeal to her

 

He is in the last bed with your thoughts and

He is sinking in to the last hale

He is suffering to see your face

Though you are not here

His eyes are searching your face

It is my appeal to you to see him at least before his

                                                                  Death

He is unable to forget your smile and

He is disable to forget the days of his past

Though it may be in his twenty

He is suffering in his fifty past thirty long years

It is appeal to you to set free from his pains and

Allow him to go to his last sleep at least

 

Though you may have kiths and kin’s

Nothing wrong to heal his soul at present

If you come and show your face with love

It is enough to him to go with peace

 

SAKTHI S RAVICHANDRAN

LECTURER IN ENGLISH

PATTAMMAL ALAGESAN COLLEGE OF ARTS AND SCIENCE    ATHUR

CHENGALPATTU   TAMILNADU INDIA

 

— SAKTHEEE2007, Feb 15, 2009

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yenti

yenti

17 years 3 months ago

Sakkthee

This piece couldn't hold my thoughts, it became a bit out of flow, The line:- His eyes are searching your face Could have been left out and the next line split in two if you are wanting to keep the Stanzas in six lines ,but then you make it to four in the last one, just a little sort. He is disable to forget the days of his past.... this I would think would be "Unable" as disable is to make unfunctional, stay with us and we look forward to your edit and next pieces, Yours Ian.T