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By the derelict greenhouses

 

 "BY THE DERELICT GREENHOUSES" or "Missy's  Paradise" (Miss Otis's, a dachshund) 1970's

 

The world floats 

with a newspaper 

and a window

to the land of rubbish 

below 

an old pair of shoes 

matt brown 

by the abandoned green-houses 

 

with the silver door

dinner still waits for no one 

on the metal swing chair

flowerpots 

cracked patterns

by the plastic 

"net curtained" windows

the bills in order on a nail 

 

torn and burnt

one dozen...?

the armchair 

in a paradise of grass and 

exotic weeds

governs the wasteland 

its feet firmly 

planted in the mud

 

immobile and proud 

with its straight back 

and bent arms

an exhibition of old doors 

numbered, nailed 

or collaged with ads

fetch millions 

on the international markets 

 

of the 2000's

here a car 

once parked 

and shed its wings 

rolled off its tyres

steered into a patch of paprika 

and cast out flowers

woods made of it a theatre 

 

with no people to act in

only decay 

and the industry of insects 

and wild life

it faces the world 

in a new role

the oil can and 

woodland Ikebana

 

a leaf on a twig nailed

yellow

a dandelion strives 

to show above 

the living room carpet

the plastic horse 

beheaded by 

an exploded bottle.


— Nordic cloud, Feb 14, 2009

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Region, Country: Oslo and Flatdal, Norway., NOR

Favorite Poets: Too daunting this.

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Rett

Rett

17 years 3 months ago

Ann

I love rooting around old abandoned places. I tend to photograph some of them because of the character involved. I got some great pics of old abandoned and run down stores and houses and barns. I love that kind of stuff. Well done! Respectfully, Rett: "Next time you think you're perfect, walk on water." If government is the answer, it's a stupid question!
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

17 years 3 months ago

Yum, this was a delicious

Yum, this was a delicious picnic lunch of surprises & whimsicality... made me sigh with satisfaction & fond contentment.. I especially loved the theatre car in a patch of paprika &... "...and cast out flowers woods made of it a theatre with no people to act in only decay and the industry of insects and wild life it faces the world in a new role the oil can and woodland Ikebana a leaf on a twig nailed yellow a dandelion strives to show above the living room carpet the plastic horse beheaded by an exploded bottle." Well done Fjordland Ann, loved this! Anni I wish to walk gracefully..... so as not to spill water.
C

Conect11

17 years 3 months ago

love it! Fabulous!

I want to see Norway, even more than ever. I love the beautiful, rotted, abandoned places. There is an old coast guard station, deserted in 1978 on the shore of Lake Erie. Beautiful lighthouse tower in it. I longed to find access to it for years, until finally I was able to make my way over a crumbling causeway to its front door. I giggled like an insane kitten when I got to go in, to see its crumbling beauty. I went back several times, each with fantasies of building it into a quaint inn, with a library bar etc. To climb up to the second floor was fooishness; the roof had collapsed and the whole floor seemed rotted. The authorities have since boarded it up, and fixed the causeway so that the public can now legally walk up to it, but not enter. Such is life. There is talk of making a museum out of it, which would be fine enough, but oh how I love those ruins! Mark W. "An insult is just someone who hates you making a noise to indicate their hatred, a barking dog. Criticism is someone trying to help you, by telling you something about yourself that you were a little too comfortable not knowing. " ~ David Wong
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years 3 months ago

Norway's good for such

We have a huge collection of slides of "things" in such places so all this can be illustrated in detail. Glad you had fun visiting it Anni too, Mark, yes you should come and see, Denmark has a little but its too tidy, Sweden has some but Norway's best - or worst depending how you look at it. Kongsberg:- there we found half a chess set, just the white ones, wonderful electricity porcelain. Greenhouses:- Now gone, found a good jam jar- sort of antique here. Cat place:- by the river here in Oslo where the dachshund made a bee line to find the river of cats that hid under the red painted shacks. Old abandoned houses: where we have a big white plate we use on special occasions; and in another old farm, now collapsed I climbed up the rickety staircase and across the bedroom found a Bible written in gothic writing. There are many such places and beautiful timber work with patterned edges to windows or weathered old tools - so beautiful. I diverge but I love such places too. They have the history of the occupants written on the objects and the walls, and if you sit quietly you might even here the dialect and the whole story told in the ether of the air around you. The apple tree still produces fruit in the forgotten garden. Oh there is one more I MUST tell of the one in Scotland it was walled,my sister and I saw the vague silhouette of a wall and found a tiny wooden door on one side, we battled in through the undergrowth and came out into the "secret garden." Yours Romantically Ann
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Conect11

17 years 3 months ago

I would say

your comment was as equally romantic and poetic as the poem! If the travel industry had you in their employ I would have been in Europe years ago. "The apple tree still produces fruit in the forgotten garden..." a gem! Not just poetically, either. Just the thought! I must tell you of something I found in Buffalo, New York once. My sister, some friends, and I were driving back home from Niagara Falls when we decided to camp overnight. (the drive home was much too far to try and get all the way home.) We found a campsite in an old Indian reservation. Upon poking our heads about we discovered a chain link fence with a noticable hole in one part of it. Some of us squeezed through the hole, and after getting through some brush there was a beautifully derelect beach on the shore of Lake Erie. There was a washed up tree, bleached white from years in the sun, the whole place had a serenity uncompromised. This was at about 2 in the morning, and there was a freighter off in the distance so the effect was quite intoxicating. I doubt I could ever find that place again, both physically or in my heart, but for that evening it was magical. Mark W. "An insult is just someone who hates you making a noise to indicate their hatred, a barking dog. Criticism is someone trying to help you, by telling you something about yourself that you were a little too comfortable not knowing. " ~ David Wong
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

17 years 3 months ago

Synchronicity in secret gardens.. go see Craig's latest post.

Oh what hillarious synchronicity dear Ann, I just now finished writing a response to Craig's last post & mentioned you, (& others) I titled my comment partly "secret garden"!!!! I love what you have written as always.. so rich & so much more, I always feel, to explore... We would be such fast friends (will be I am sure.. I feel are already becoming so) if we lived close, I would love afternoons with Fjordland Ann, my lovely living sculpture (I would love to carve your image in stone with your lovely knot ended locks & warm vibrant smile). Ta for your descriptions, how lovely to go there through you. I so want to tell you of my choir meeting today I know you would love it... I taught the song (I wrote yesterday & only created a tune for this morning before I went to teach it) that we must sing for the Bushfire concert benefit on Sunday... & there is more on my mermaid friend.. but I must go record what I taught them now - before I forget how it goes!!! I will be in touch though xx Anni May I wish to walk gracefully..... so as not to spill water.
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 3 months ago

Ann...

the place you so richly describe makes me feel I have been, but I have not. As an army-brat I did get to live in Germany, and I thought its landscapes beautiful even then. And I remember the cottages and beautiful gardens in the countryside. thanks for posting this memorable piece... Richard
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years 3 months ago

Thank you moonman

and all of you who have written here, yes the inspiration of wild places is wonderfully surrealist, associative and dramatic and never ceases to amuse me for hours. My pal, here, made sculptures with used scrap-iron which we had to delve for in a mountain of the stuff, we were walking/climbing around for hours shouting now and then when one of us found something terrific to use, the resulting sculpture have a timelessness added to by the beauty of the hand forged, or well worn iron. One of these S's is way taller than him and is quite formidable. Yes give me the wild gardens where the flowers have decided where they want to grow, that was my garden and you couldn't walk for flowers, anything that bloomed and was not a total flop, weeds and all was allowed to add to the pageant of its robe. Keep hunting and you will find the gold that's more worth than GOLD. Ann
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Conect11

17 years 3 months ago

A poem that you inspired in me..

In the Wild Places I too love to forage in the places nature reclaimed, the formerly conquered patches now crumbling. It took me twenty – nine years to find Whiskey Island, and its beautiful old lighthouse once used by the coast guard. Walk unsteadily over a crumbling grey causeway, after hopping the fence with “Warning! Keep Out!” that no one pays attention to. It’s the secret places, in whom trees have sprung up right through the floor tiles, reaching up to a collapsed roof, and sunlight. I never made it up to the light tower, but the lobby, the filthy lobby with debris and dirt and broken glass, peeling paint is a scene from the most fantastic movie. I dreamt once of visiting Chernobyl; more specifically the towns around it, now a vast dead zone, immediately abandoned. Oh, if only that was safe. And I imagined visiting the many forsaken missile silos of the Midwest. I must do this quickly, as some are being bought and converted into luxury town homes. Criminals to do such things! The city tore down the old hospital near church; a shame, this. Still, there are rumors of an old asylum in Indiana. Where there are courtyards let them grow into wild gardens. Where there is glass, let it be broken and litter the ground. Where plaster is cast let it lay, crumbled. I wonder what the supermarket will look like in five – hundred years. Or better yet, my house in a millennium. Just over a hundred years ago my entire street was one farm. Just over a hundred years ago, so was the forest at Findley State Park, reclaimed green space now. “Yes give me the wild gardens where the flowers have decided where they want to grow” 1 Give me decay, greenery, moss and lichen and trees, the bramble, the thorn, and the poisonous berry. And I will smile when I see nature conquer man, again. 1. Ann Harvey. Oslo, Norway Mark W. "An insult is just someone who hates you making a noise to indicate their hatred, a barking dog. Criticism is someone trying to help you, by telling you something about yourself that you were a little too comfortable not knowing. " ~ David Wong
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

17 years 3 months ago

So lovely, these responses

So lovely, these responses all... See Ann, what you inspire... ripples spreading throughout us all from your intial plunge.. & how I am enjoying each response including your own.. to your lovely writing... Life is good, I feel spoilt & blessed! Anni I wish to walk gracefully..... so as not to spill water.
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years 3 months ago

Oh dear Mark

How lovely to inspire someone else, to inspire you I am happy, yes happy that I can, I am dancing round the room. round the (A)Maypole!!. I have been the one inspired by 'someone' this last year, and been on a high of excitement and joy. Inspiration is the only way to teach too, is it not? The teachers that inspire can create wonderful friends in the culture of their languages. You have been writing and writing with energy this evening-morning or whatever it is where you have been!!! What a wonderful name Whiskey Island, I can hear the crunching glass and the sudden falling of masonry around the vibrations of your footsteps. Yes, you read my comment chez Anni about the forests causing so many tiny fledgelings to perish each time they cut down the trees? Same thing. All in the name of progress...towards what? Nature quietly looks on with eyes wide open and cannot bat an eyelid in its amazement. Topping Marko Yours Ann of Noreg
JL

Jo Latimer

17 years 3 months ago

Ah, Ann of the north...

Loved this one. As a child, my best friend & I would go rooting around where other people dumped their old toasters etc & the stories we came up with defied description! Sincerely: one mans' rubbish was our treasure & clearly Missy concurs. Jo
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KambateSpike

17 years 3 months ago

Phenomenal

I love it. Nothing more to say, this was simply exquisite.
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 3 months ago

Ann...

I had to come back and walk in your garden again... my hat is off dear lady, Richard
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years 3 months ago

Do you really have a hat! Richard?

When I stepped into Norway in 1972 every male had a trilby hat on and quiet sounding shoes, a gangsters mackintosh and the quiet after three weeks in London was so eerie, they looked like something out of a crime film. I do however enjoy hats, and am pleased when someone takes the trouble, and has the audacity to sport one these days. One could almost liken a poem to a hat, a little bit of this and that (or whigmaleerie as the Scottish call it), a little bit of extravagant rhetoric and there's a hat to be proud of. Thank you for visiting my garden, this one we visited so often and every time found a new and exciting things to add to the collection of absurd objects in the archives of our brains. The collages of our perception, they are indeed the most fantastic collages ever. Yours hatted, Ann of Norway.