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By the derelict greenhouses
"BY THE DERELICT GREENHOUSES" or "Missy's Paradise" (Miss Otis's, a dachshund) 1970's
The world floats
with a newspaper
and a window
to the land of rubbish
below
an old pair of shoes
matt brown
by the abandoned green-houses
with the silver door
dinner still waits for no one
on the metal swing chair
flowerpots
cracked patterns
by the plastic
"net curtained" windows
the bills in order on a nail
torn and burnt
one dozen...?
the armchair
in a paradise of grass and
exotic weeds
governs the wasteland
its feet firmly
planted in the mud
immobile and proud
with its straight back
and bent arms
an exhibition of old doors
numbered, nailed
or collaged with ads
fetch millions
on the international markets
of the 2000's
here a car
once parked
and shed its wings
rolled off its tyres
steered into a patch of paprika
and cast out flowers
woods made of it a theatre
with no people to act in
only decay
and the industry of insects
and wild life
it faces the world
in a new role
the oil can and
woodland Ikebana
a leaf on a twig nailed
yellow
a dandelion strives
to show above
the living room carpet
the plastic horse
beheaded by
an exploded bottle.
Critiques
Rett
17 years 3 months ago
Ann
Cloudthings
17 years 3 months ago
Yum, this was a delicious
Conect11
17 years 3 months ago
love it! Fabulous!
Nordic cloud
17 years 3 months ago
Norway's good for such
Conect11
17 years 3 months ago
I would say
Cloudthings
17 years 3 months ago
Synchronicity in secret gardens.. go see Craig's latest post.
themoonman
17 years 3 months ago
Ann...
Nordic cloud
17 years 3 months ago
Thank you moonman
Conect11
17 years 3 months ago
A poem that you inspired in me..
Cloudthings
17 years 3 months ago
So lovely, these responses
Nordic cloud
17 years 3 months ago
Oh dear Mark
Jo Latimer
17 years 3 months ago
Ah, Ann of the north...
KambateSpike
17 years 3 months ago
Phenomenal
themoonman
17 years 3 months ago
Ann...
Nordic cloud
17 years 3 months ago
Do you really have a hat! Richard?