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serenity

in the midst of morning mist

when shrubs their petalled branches

usher towards the sky

and muted grass, though trampled,

utterly refuse to die

where trees in their devoir shadows cast

that lull and heaven through

woolly clouds the sun allows to shine,

i sense the heave of giant tides

invade the slumber of the day

‘till wearily the massive waves

retire to the borders of the sway

where wings inexhaustibly flutter

over wooded lands and plains,

i see a lonely eagle prudently soar

while circling the afternoon for prey

 

‘tis where I want to stay

and lounge my days away

‘tis where I want to hear

my children’s chants

and songs without a rhyme

‘tis where i want to attest their innocence

in the serenity they decree,

by the nonsense

they utter in my ear

— nokros, Feb 13, 2009

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Region, Country: Northern Cape, South Africa

Favorite Poets: Phillis Wheatley

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R.M.Shanmugam

17 years 3 months ago

Well defined with masterly

Well defined with masterly stroke of pen. this is the first time i read your poem. cheers. shan
nokros

nokros

17 years 3 months ago

R.M.Shanmugam

sir i always appreciate your worthy comment. God bless
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barbsdad2003

17 years 3 months ago

Rich ...

in imagery, in double/triple meaning(s), in detail ... although could be enriched with even more of same. I particularly like "while circling the afternoon for prey." Says so much on so many levels. Nicely wrought. (And as for me, I'm so glad you're here.) Thanx, Chuck
nokros

nokros

17 years 3 months ago

barbsdad2003

chuck i again feel so appreciated by your imposing words. thanx for the warm welcome. yours nokros
Tonya

Tonya

17 years 3 months ago

it is a beautiful picture i

it is a beautiful picture i would like to stay at too. one can get lost in the description, feel the breeze, hear the waves, hear the gulls and call of the eagle. the voices of children playing. their innocent questions and tales! Lovely lovely. I shall have to read more of your writing! I really enjoyed this one! Tonya
nokros

nokros

17 years 2 months ago

Tonya

tonya, i am humbled by your beautiful comments. thank you so much. yours nokros