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Feb 12, 2009
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The Fire In My Blood
I've told you before my sweet
but it bears repeating now
upon this helpless edge of joy
bodies joined
breath shared
hearts hammering
skins melded
heat welded
to this pressure ridge
that seperates
our pleasure from our ecstacy
where your impish grin becomes
a lower lip caught in teeth
and your face says that
you cannot quite
believe the pure delight
of rhythm we're about to start
love flooding from your dark
jet eyes into my heart...
of all the women of the world
the only one
who'll ever feel my touch
is you
the years we've spent together
seem as brief as stolen moments
and the years we'll share
for decades hence will never be enough
marriage, children, work and play
long years of building family
I thought I'd never have
and even now
you fire my blood.
but it bears repeating now
upon this helpless edge of joy
bodies joined
breath shared
hearts hammering
skins melded
heat welded
to this pressure ridge
that seperates
our pleasure from our ecstacy
where your impish grin becomes
a lower lip caught in teeth
and your face says that
you cannot quite
believe the pure delight
of rhythm we're about to start
love flooding from your dark
jet eyes into my heart...
of all the women of the world
the only one
who'll ever feel my touch
is you
the years we've spent together
seem as brief as stolen moments
and the years we'll share
for decades hence will never be enough
marriage, children, work and play
long years of building family
I thought I'd never have
and even now
you fire my blood.
— Race_9togo, Feb 12, 2009
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deelilah
17 years 3 months ago
Hello Jim
Race_9togo
17 years 3 months ago
Thanks Deelilah
Mistyone
17 years 3 months ago
beautiful
Race_9togo
17 years 3 months ago
:)
Race_9togo
17 years 3 months ago
Thanks Janice
R.M.Shanmugam
17 years 3 months ago
The hottest love poem
Race_9togo
17 years 3 months ago
Hi Shan
Debra Bryant
17 years 3 months ago
Jim,
Race_9togo
17 years 3 months ago
LOL thanks Debbie
Ink Dragon
17 years 3 months ago
Jim,
Race_9togo
17 years 3 months ago
Nina
Rett
17 years 3 months ago
Jim Jim Jim
Race_9togo
17 years 3 months ago
Rett
loveyu74848
17 years 3 months ago
wonderful… beautiful…
Race_9togo
17 years 3 months ago
Thanks loveyu