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Feb 12, 2009
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‘tis daybreak at last, such an easy sun shines
on a land tormented by seasons of scar
those decades of rot, so vivid yet far, lay
prostrate and languish on the dusted altar
oh! weep no further you maiden of south
find solemn promise in shackleless bound
delight thy soul in culture and song
‘till thy spirit divineth in angelical sound
though the fields were pillaged - covered with waste
take heed, for the weary heart find salvage and joy,
in the minutes of mercy’s leftover chants
echo’d over plains with zest and buoy
from the bosom of this earth, abandoned
no more, virtue and faith like nectar shall flow
like virgin raindrops, unfamiliar, yet
defiant in the calm of the grim afternoon glow!
— nokros, Feb 12, 2009
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