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Feb 11, 2009
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There I want a Place
There I want a place
I am in need of a place
Where peace rules with love
I am in search of a gate
To go out from this nasty hell
I am in urge of a womb
To reborn in the land of love
I am in fond of a dawn
To light in the dark
I am in the thoughts of my own
To have a place there with my Dad
May be there some sinners and
May be there some evils
My Father will forgive them
He has to come and change
The entire lives of this land
His arrival should not be too far and
His appearance should be kept available to all
There I want a place to keep me with my Father
— SAKTHEEE2007, Feb 11, 2009
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maybetomorrow
17 years 3 months ago
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