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There I want a Place




There I want a place

 

 

I am in need of a place

Where peace rules with love

I am in search of a gate

To go out from this nasty hell

I am in urge of a womb

To reborn in the land of love

I am in fond of a dawn

To light in the dark

I am in the thoughts of my own

To have a place there with my Dad

 

May be there some sinners and

May be there some evils

My Father will forgive them

He has to come and change

The entire lives of this land

His arrival should not be too far and

His appearance should be kept available to all

There I want a place to keep me with my Father

 

 

 


— SAKTHEEE2007, Feb 11, 2009

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maybetomorrow

17 years 3 months ago

Love it

First off your writing style is quite unique! I love it! "I am in need of a place Where peace rules with love I am in search of a gate To go out from this nasty hell" this is the line that really drew me in. It is very relatable and I thank you for sharing... <3 Jess :D