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Heart of a Poet

What’s in the heart of a poetIs it wintry and fruitlessAn apple tree degraded by mustard gasOr nothingThere has to be somethingIn the heart of a poetIt cannot be baron with numbnessFeeling of a psychopath, thinkCan a psychopath be a poetNoA poet is merely a mixed bag of feelingsDisheveled, in disarray, arranged by no creative orderAs no poet is tidy, for no writing is poorerWhen written with a blank expressionIn a neat room, on a leather chairWith every piece of paper filed properWhat’s in the heart of a poet Nothing There’s just blood-soaked paper
— bloke, Feb 11, 2009

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themoonman

themoonman

17 years 3 months ago

Damn!

sorry but... damn! ok, now it's out... loved this colorful write... blood-soaked paper... great ending line but if it were me, I think I would have said No more than blood-soaked paper... the word "nothing" seems so final to me... but just an idea for you as I truly loved this write... Richard
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bloke

17 years 3 months ago

cheers

thanks richard, and yeah i tossed up between nothing and a line similiar to the one you suggested, and ill certainly take into consideration that maybe i should do a bit of editing. oddly i used the word nothing because it is so final, i wanted as brutal a set up to the finishing line as possible without going too over the top. i was trying to represent that poets do have vibrant heart, only what is inside of them doesn't stay in there for long, it is quickly released in writing. cheers brent
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 3 months ago

brent...

thank you for considering... and what's more is the thoughts you had already considered... if final is what you were going for then it is there and I wouldn't change it... thank you for your impressive explanation... and again I say... damn... loved this poem! Richard