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MISTAKEN FOR A MAD MAN

MISTAKEN FOR A MAD MAN   A middle aged man worked in the market Doing a bob-a-job to make a living He carried baskets of banana and beans And collected stipends for body and soul   With wheel barrow, he rolled in the goods From the road to the sellers’ stalls inside In and out he ran to catch up with the day While dirt covered him from head to toe   When evening came he packed his kit And picked up his tattered umbrella With pockets full of small bills and coins He set his steps to meet his wife at home   On the way he encountered men in-charge Who gathered all the lunatics in town In one straight line they marched like slaves To the asylum, where they put them away   They beat tin cans with discordant tunes The music echoed the insanity they suffered With saucers in hand appealing for alms While their captors watched from afar   On sighting the poor drudge coming in rags The guards mistook him for the insane And they asked him to join the queue He queried them and refused to comply   Two stocky men stepped out with force of brute He wrestled with them to free from their grip They heaved him high and dropped on the ground With elbow scratched, blood came rushing out   The passers-by were befuddled by what they saw The look on his face gave an impression of dismay Was it a crime to be a poor man, he seemed to ask And he shouted loudly, ‘Chineke… Police no dey’


   
— t. reflexion, Feb 10, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Country/Region: NGA

Favorite Poets: Inspired by an article in an old manuscript , It reads:, AXIOMS OF PERFECTION, In the physical order – In the realization of the dream of beauty, In the moral order – In the realization of the dream of love, In the intellectual order – In the realization of dream of poetry, In the spiritual order – In the realization of the dream of the mystics

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t. reflexion

t. reflexion

17 years 3 months ago

Narrative poem and run on lines...

Amartya, what are the differences between the two. we are not restricted to poem with rhyme scheme in this part of the world as the challenge of translating original idea from mother tongue into English makes the final product to loose its main substance watered down by rules. Also, just like you said, the poor man has lost everything, be it dignity or respect. For your comments and for finding time to read, I appreciate and best wishes. PS: Please can you suggest better title? Thanks. T.
yenti

yenti

17 years 3 months ago

T Rex

Quite a holding piece and well written, it is the way of the world that these things happen, how long before there is a cure for all these things is a mystery. Probably civilisations grow into a nothingness where to mention their name is as swearing. Looking forward to read some more, Yours Ian.T
t. reflexion

t. reflexion

17 years 3 months ago

Yenti

Thank you for you continued encouragement, finding time to read my scribbles and for the comments. Best wishes. T.