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BAPTIZE HIM NOT

BAPTIZE HIM NOT   To baptize we were asked to learn The catechism by heart and words of creed Words born out of understanding the law Graded in stages of one, two and three   We passed from a Monday class to the next Tuesday graduated to a mature Wednesday The holy book was read in native tongue Difficult it was, I panicked all the time   Reading a verse each, I counted my turn Rehearsed to flow if none missed the twirl So it was my roll to read verse twelve, then Steeped in nervousness, I said, ‘twelve verse’   The laughter that followed made me stupid But I offended no one nor sinned against God Baptism exams date fixed for a Saturday Superintendent Examiner asked my name   Who is your father and where is he The civil war had him behind enemy line So I wasn’t asked anything relevant at all Not even my knowledge of the catechism   When names of those qualified to be reborn In holy flowing river of baptismal bliss Was pasted in this particular House of God Men had sat in council to remove my name   My cousins celebrated a landmark of faith So swathed in sadness, the years tagged along There, conspiracy unearthed a fowl, which was Not to upset a staunch apostolic deacon dad   My aunty told the superintendent man of God That my father won’t take it kindly with her When and if he ever returned to see his only son Initiated into the basilica of other beliefs   You see, men took decision for God that day In a sanctuary wrongly labelled in vernacular God’s house became a house full of men of means Where they decided the fate of the weak and young



   
— t. reflexion, Feb 09, 2009

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Country/Region: NGA

Favorite Poets: Inspired by an article in an old manuscript , It reads:, AXIOMS OF PERFECTION, In the physical order – In the realization of the dream of beauty, In the moral order – In the realization of the dream of love, In the intellectual order – In the realization of dream of poetry, In the spiritual order – In the realization of the dream of the mystics

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yenti

yenti

17 years 3 months ago

T.R

A very involved piece of writing more for a short story if flowered a little with others feelings, still a complex write and well done there, Yours Ian.T
t. reflexion

t. reflexion

17 years 2 months ago

Hi Yenti

I have been tagged a story telling poet by friends and I like telling stories in poetic form or verses. The implication in the story here, is the potential of the actions taken by the elders which can mislead a young mind away from religious interest due to frustration. Thank you and best wishes. T.