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The Temple

words are hushed when spoken
dropped into  silence to fade
in depth of water blue as
distant pale ice, still as frozen earth
stretching to forever from the shore
all memory of summer gone.

the evergreens reach silent    
from their secret places deep
within the shadowed clefts between
cold-haunted dunes,
slow air steeped in spice of pines
their rough skins rich
with hints of red and orange bright
against the dark of winter green.

the carpets of their fallen needles
deny the fall of footsteps
and quiet hiss of frozen softness
kept at bay from underneath
the spread of branches
by sleeping foliage
entombed in shrouds of snow.

the sand the sign of slow erosion
glows warm in faded winter sunshine,
beaten gold revealed by time and
near-forgotten storm now made
mere memory of wind and wave
by stillness so complete
its silence is alive.

this is the sacredness
of sleeping life
encompassing all things
this is the timelessness
between life's moments
the voicelessness of word that speaks
of truth and love to those who listen
this is the temple of the soul
the quiet temple of my heart.
— Race_9togo, Feb 08, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Earth Vicinity (within a five light-year radius), ZZC

Favorite Poets: John Donne, T.S. Eliot, Serendipity, Emily Dickenson, Kailashana, Charles Bukowski, Kabir, Rett, Dalton, W. B. Yeats, William Blake, Rainer Maria Rilke, and many other Neopoet poets; Neopoet has heavily influenced my poetry and my ability to write it well.

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Critiques

infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 3 months ago

Jim

Nice description of the cycle and circle of life. I really liked the closing lines. ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- -"As you slide down the banister of life, may the splinters never point in the wrong direction!" -"God is good, but never dance in a small boat."
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

17 years 3 months ago

Thanks Jess

Love the dragon! Respectfully Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race
deelilah

deelilah

17 years 3 months ago

Awesome poem

This is really beautiful. The poem read/felt like an endless kind of existence. It had an eternal quality. It seemed a little like listening to new-age music in earphones, but the rhythm stayed tight, and the whole thing flowed, and the images were strong. 'slow air steeped in spice of pines their rough skins rich with hints of red and orange bright against the dark of winter green.' Words like these kept it grounded and tactile. Yours, Dee
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

17 years 3 months ago

Thanks Deelilah

I wrote this sitting beneath the pines in one of my favorite places along the Indiana Lakeshore, amid the dunes between the steel mills and Michigan City. I think I tried managed to capture how the place makes me feel. I hope I did, at least! Glad you enjoyed it Respectfully Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race
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R.M.Shanmugam

17 years 3 months ago

sacredness, timelessness,

sacredness, timelessness, soul of the tmple are the well chosen words to sdorn the poem. shan
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

17 years 3 months ago

Thank you Shan

If you ever get the chance, you must visit the Indiana lakeshore, at the southern tip of Lake Michigan. between all of the Industry and urban sprawl are some of the loveliest places on Earth, my friend. Glad you enjoyed so much Respectfully Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race