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Feb 08, 2009
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a perfect circle of naked ravens
1.
we always form a perfect circle
you and i,
i and you,
there are days when
i forget all about you
there are moments when
only the night weeps.
2.
we were naked ravens once
sleek ebon feathers
piercing
rainbows of indifference,
remember?
we listened to samurai swords
clashing and splitting
through the aphonic darkness,
gathering fin and wing
around us
we watch smoldering embers
slowly dying,
fall from the sky
silently drawn to the earth below.
3.
daylight skims the surface
the birdtribes are returning
light shimmers with radiance
and the light is all around
wrapped up in dark cloth
breaking through
the falling air
like beads of poetry
and cloudless sky
hushed,
for now.
4.
past the point of no return
the fatigue of living wears me out,
I have lived and died
an infinity of stars
flickering
with the brightest light,
we are moonchildren
and grandmother warriors
with grandfather dreams
of daylight,
we resemble
little earthquakes of joy
and mountains of sorrow
we wear the cloth of
self, draped over thin frames,
fraying
at the seams,
seemingly
we abandon ourselves.
we always form a perfect circle
you and i,
i and you,
there are days when
i forget all about you
there are moments when
only the night weeps.
2.
we were naked ravens once
sleek ebon feathers
piercing
rainbows of indifference,
remember?
we listened to samurai swords
clashing and splitting
through the aphonic darkness,
gathering fin and wing
around us
we watch smoldering embers
slowly dying,
fall from the sky
silently drawn to the earth below.
3.
daylight skims the surface
the birdtribes are returning
light shimmers with radiance
and the light is all around
wrapped up in dark cloth
breaking through
the falling air
like beads of poetry
and cloudless sky
hushed,
for now.
4.
past the point of no return
the fatigue of living wears me out,
I have lived and died
an infinity of stars
flickering
with the brightest light,
we are moonchildren
and grandmother warriors
with grandfather dreams
of daylight,
we resemble
little earthquakes of joy
and mountains of sorrow
we wear the cloth of
self, draped over thin frames,
fraying
at the seams,
seemingly
we abandon ourselves.
— Kailashana, Feb 08, 2009
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yenti
17 years 4 months ago
Beautiful
Kailashana
17 years 4 months ago
Thanks for stopping by my
RSScheerer
17 years 4 months ago
Anna
Kailashana
17 years 4 months ago
Thanks Ronda, for both the
Arrow
17 years 4 months ago
#4
Kailashana
17 years 4 months ago
Arrow, do you notice how
Arrow
17 years 4 months ago
I often notice my subconscious
Kailashana
17 years 4 months ago
It’s more than just
Arrow
17 years 4 months ago
Yes, alright
Conect11
17 years 4 months ago
The most beautiful piece
Kailashana
17 years 4 months ago
I worry when someone
Conect11
17 years 4 months ago
lol!
Stella
17 years 4 months ago
*Beautiful* Anna You have
Nordic cloud
17 years 4 months ago
Now I have been a raven