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love is .........

what bodes love's cheerful glee?
if in passion's parlour lay,
deftly from lover's eyes obscured
the dismal residue of reverie's decay

why so serene love's panting spell
that lights the eyes of mortal beings?
till heavenly sweet their blessed dream,
unchallenged through the darkness beams,
and on their cheeks the rosy blaze
of blooming peace sublimely mirrors
the purer zeal thy raptured hearts arrest

love is but a contamination of the soul
while o'er the placid look unmoved,
the grin that tells the naked truth:
thou art but nature's forlorn child! 

— nokros, Feb 08, 2009

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Region, Country: Northern Cape, South Africa

Favorite Poets: Phillis Wheatley

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theladyblue

theladyblue

17 years 4 months ago

your poetic voice...

rings with a type of familiarity that i cant seem to shake...perhaps upon reading more of your work i will know why...again welcome to Neopoet! <3 Emarie @~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@ 'My prayer is a rapture in blue' - The Ink Spots 'My Prayer' 1939
nokros

nokros

17 years 4 months ago

Hi EmarieYou are right -

Hi Emarie You are right - this is my second life. It feels like we had an affair long ago. In any case thanks for the welcome. Nokros
yenti

yenti

17 years 4 months ago

Nokros

It is strange that you seem to write in the old way of a few years ago. As young as I am I remember it well, where days were more casual than now, and the way of words was gentler on the ear. As if you had just been talking to byron or one of the oldies. The flow was good and the piece was very good and made music, Yours Ian.T
nokros

nokros

17 years 4 months ago

dear ian

i stand guilty. i speak to moore on a daily basis. well, you won't remember him - too young. i do appreciate your positive comment and wish for a long-term relationship.
Proprietress of Crimson Hearts

Proprietress o…

17 years 4 months ago

reverie’s decay...

nowadays, this kind of poem is to poetry what analog black and white shots are to photography. this, my friend, is art. your Proprietress
nokros

nokros

17 years 4 months ago

Proprietress

you astound me. everything you say seem to have a poetic tone to it. thanx for the uplift.
Rett

Rett

17 years 3 months ago

Ah Nokros

'tis music to mine ears to hear the thoughts of eld for sweet the words gentle soul that the mind once has held Man, that does my soul good to hear words so well spoken without the crass contempt a lot of the modern style holds. Thank you sir. Respectfully, Rett: "Next time you think you're perfect, walk on water." If government is the answer, it's a stupid question!
nokros

nokros

17 years 3 months ago

Rett:

my soul is enhanced by such a perfect comment. you make my stay worth its while - God bless.