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Feb 08, 2009
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Dawning
Foam descends the pipe
porridge fried-fish and tea
the neighbour starts her
chatter again
children scream
a shoe sole flips over in
the morning breeze
dew drops from a
pool into a rusty basin
the spider weaves a web
a beetle floats by his legs kicking
the kingfisher plunges
a skylark rises out of the mists
and disappears into nowhere
four cracks in the window pane,
how did they get there?
the sea paint’s mountain ranges
in the sand
the cliffs scarlet,
a no-colour sea
small stones on sand starred rises
untidy seaweed
a pale intense blue
fills the world with day.
— Nordic cloud, Feb 08, 2009
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Proprietress o…
17 years 4 months ago
Ann of Norway,
karamat
17 years 3 months ago
Very good idea, and a very
Quillsvein1
17 years 3 months ago
amazing imagery
Nordic cloud
17 years 3 months ago
Dawning
themoonman
17 years 3 months ago
Ann...
DawningDaytripper
16 years 4 months ago
Well I love your title on