theladyblue

Feb 07, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Fondle

half-heartedly fighting the restrain begging again and again decide to black the eyes and perhaps but no, you see sultry, smoky, come-hither what am I to do… resist, yes… but why… no I mustn’t think on the matter my hair in a tatter and still you see sexy, bed head, tease me damn you and your drowning pools of bed room eyes…

— theladyblue, Feb 07, 2009

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themoonman

17 years 4 months ago

Ladyblue...

lol... we just can't help ourselves... my wife accuses me of the same behavior... and I say, I want ya! loved this write... great ending lines... Richard

theladyblue

17 years 4 months ago

ahhh Richard

Then it must be something in the name lol for mine is named Richard as well...dastardly bards you are! lol Thanks for the comment hun! <3 Emarie @~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@ 'My prayer is a rapture in blue' - The Ink Spots 'My Prayer' 1939

themoonman

17 years 4 months ago

You are quite welcome...

I guess I connected with it... I want to go wake my wife for her to read it, but, I don't think I can get past the sexy way she snores...lol.... sorry, couldn't help myself again... it's late or early...and I must go back to bed... Richard

theladyblue

17 years 4 months ago

haha...

funny I think my husband would say the same about my snoring...LOL Richard...i've always thought so and now i know you must be a good man! get some sleep hun! Much Love <3 Emarie @~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@ 'My prayer is a rapture in blue' - The Ink Spots 'My Prayer' 1939

orgami

17 years 4 months ago

the writing of the sensual plan

I love the sensuality of poems of people writing as they are the energy flowing like a spring stream like a river dark and climbing amazing full of action curling currents drawing interest arousing Great poem

theladyblue

17 years 4 months ago

Resistance is futile…

but O O O its magic... you know o o.... LOL ok enough of that... well a few words on one of your last... arousing... poetry for me is like sex it can be tender romantic sweet sassy bitter even holy and yes oh yes most of all it is an arousing process reading and writing alike firestorms are a common problem for me at least even in this sticky southern weather...72 today funny how it mirrors... <3 Emarie @~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@ 'My prayer is a rapture in blue' - The Ink Spots 'My Prayer' 1939

theladyblue

17 years 4 months ago

quick Kels...

cover your eyes!!! noooooooooooooooo im too late...coruption!!!!!!!! sorry sis, for the icky stuff!!! lol but thanks for readin! <3 Emarie @~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@ 'My prayer is a rapture in blue' - The Ink Spots 'My Prayer' 1939

Proprietress o…

17 years 4 months ago

and perhaps... but no...

the abrupt breaks and turns are great. we are swift labyrinths. good thing you found a man who can keep up. :-) this is a great piece, Emarie. your Proprietress

theladyblue

17 years 4 months ago

we are swift labyrinths...

indeed, Proprietres, indeed... <3 Emarie @~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@ 'My prayer is a rapture in blue' - The Ink Spots 'My Prayer' 1939

Quillsvein1

17 years 4 months ago

well you

certainly accomplish the sensuality and slow rise of physicality in this piece! wow. my favorite here is definitely: "and your drowning pools/of bed room eyes…" great image of desire. awesome. GB

theladyblue

17 years 3 months ago

why thank you sir...

all i can say to that is 'I try' lol Thanks for the read! btw...those are my fav lines too... <3 Emarie @~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@ 'My prayer is a rapture in blue' - The Ink Spots 'My Prayer' 1939

nokros

17 years 4 months ago

Fondle

entices one to head towards the bedroom. continue the fashion

theladyblue

17 years 3 months ago

this fashion...

is a steady theme in my work...glad to have pleased... thanks for the read! <3 Emarie @~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@ 'My prayer is a rapture in blue' - The Ink Spots 'My Prayer' 1939

OpenCasket

17 years 3 months ago

An instant sparkle of bliss?

An instant sparkle of bliss? haha (applause)