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White Out



My heart beats
Pulsing crimson amber glow breaks
    the night's vale

A faded face,
Your whispering smile spurs my heart
The air bathes my lungs in flame
The scent of your dark hair trails the wind

Thunderous memories of you
    chain through every cavern of my mind
The image of your eyes electrifies all time,
The now fogs into a distant blur.

I do not remember you,
    yet you stain every thought I breathe.


D A (2009/02/04)
— TheDarkOne, Feb 04, 2009

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Region, Country: Western Cape, South Africa, ZAF

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yenti

yenti

17 years 3 months ago

Dark One

This one needs a little TLC and tidy but the theme was ok and I think there is a lot more of you to grace our site here,. Yours, Ian.T