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Hot E-Mail

there was that one night
we IM'ed until mourning
I solo typed
to a pixel image of u
oh how I LOL'ed that night
I quickly replied
to your request for
my sacred e-mail
Such a progressive step!
how I awaiting that
first message
apperently
I judge by deduction
that you need to be sure
that my erection is sustained
that must be why
you forwarded my Hotmail
— IKnowNoBox, Feb 03, 2009

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 4 months ago

Aw David...

nice play on words, but this is way sub-par for you. Can't wait for the redeeming poem.... :~) ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- -"As you slide down the banister of life, may the splinters never point in the wrong direction!" -"God is good, but never dance in a small boat."