The Prophetess

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Somber.

Her Countenance

Is,

As she

Outlines her eyes

With

Black.

Silently.

She strides,

As she

Creeps along

The

Floor.

Mysterious.

Her presence

Emanates,

As she

Reveals what

You

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Comments

Calliope

17 years 3 months ago

I quite liked it

Dark and sultry, mysterious ,i love this kind of poetry i especially like the line 'As she reveals what you hide' great line Lacy Where power corrupts,poetry cleanses.

poewriter58

17 years 3 months ago

Christopher

Dark and image provoking your last stanza is great I'd like to see this expanded Chrys

Shadowteller

17 years 3 months ago

I'm pleased

to see that it's provoking, and that there's a thirst for more.

Electric Blue

17 years 3 months ago

My friend Oh how I am drawn to you - cannot wait until you next write. But this piece is delightful. Soft and sultry as said above but Third stanza a suggestion? Silently she floats as she She drifts across the floor She floats across the floor Just love the images this creates but I do feel this could of been longer. waiting in anticipation for your next creation. Electricblue