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Weary Angel

Here,upon my flush-filled breast
An angels head has come to rest
Weary are his angel's wings
So many hearts with broken strings

Yet ,love shall make him whole again
And keep him filled till journey's end
Because faith and loving are really true
Till my angel came ,I never knew

He is my heart and soul's desire
He lights my flame,an eternal fire
Here rests his weary angel's head
For to my heart his wings have led

So if an angel comes to you
Keep his love for it is true
Let him rest his weary head
For angels also need to wed

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Region, Country: New York, USA

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yenti

yenti

17 years 3 months ago

Angels

will look after you only if you heed their advise or direction, they live deep inside of us all, and all they need is for us to call. Lovely write and it held my eyes, Yours, Ian.T
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

17 years 3 months ago

Weary Angel

Lacy Glad you arrived safely Enjoy the snow Ha! Angel Wings indeed Oh hearts delight beautiful to feel this way. but your last line For Angels also need to wed. If only my angel could commit I am there in an instant. yes Even if i had to walk a thousand million miles I would be there to be with him The only place i long to be beautiful words from your heart and soul be happy my dear friend. Electric blue
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Calliope

17 years 3 months ago

Thank you Blue

Yes more snow today lots of it.journey was long,but glad to be back,just got my luggage as it was delayed,lol,finally my clothes have arrived.Good luck with your angel my dear friend ,perhaps he is not weary yet,dont give up the good fight. Lacy, Thanks Yenti as well glad you liked it and yes angels advice should be heeded. Where power corrupts,poetry cleanses.
docmaverick

docmaverick

17 years 3 months ago

A poem...

....of simply "heavenly" porportions. I can't say, honestly that I believe that Angel's have a need to get married. Unless, all along...you were only spealing of an earthly angel. Nonetheless, it DID flow, very nicely as far as the "mechanics" go. I guess I just can't wrap my brain around a pair of angels flying to their honeymoon destination, with wedding cake on their cheeks, and tin cans trailing behind them. Sorry. #{:>{)}+/ docmaverick.
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poewriter58

17 years 3 months ago

Lacy

so nice to here from you again. Excellent writing though I found your last stanza a bit weaker than the others as if you didn't quite know how to end it. Chrys
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Calliope

17 years 3 months ago

Doc

Yes i was speaking of an earthly angel,as it happens it is an angel and a muse. And hello Chrys so nice to be back ,yes i guess the ending could have been more powerful but then it has a personal meaning for me ,thanks for the feedback friends much appreciated Lacy, Where power corrupts,poetry cleanses.
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Dalton

16 years 6 months ago

Dalton to Caliope

Liked this one immensely. One of my favourite topics at the moments is angels. and we all need their love and protection in such times as these Love and Respects Dalton