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leonard daranjo
Feb 05, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Space and the Egocentric Maniac - I

Slow downhe reminded himselfslow down

The journey has been long

arduous and painfulEmpty your head of all elseexceptthe feel of your breathmoving into and out of your lungsTime dissolves, melts intoa perpetual nowHis consciousnessbecomes one with time and timebecomes one with consciousnessHis head  swellsto the size of Jupiterand in ita new universe is  born 

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Rett

Rett

17 years 3 months ago

Awesome Leonard!

I absolutely love the " His head swelled to the size of Jupiter and in it a new universe was born". Almost God-like in the intensity! Wow! Respectfully, Rett: "Next time you think you're perfect, walk on water." If government is the answer, it's a stupid question!
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Calliope

17 years 3 months ago

I can relate to this poem

For i have been on this journey as well.My universe is being reborn. Lacy Where power corrupts,poetry cleanses.
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leonard daranjo

17 years 3 months ago

Thank you Lacy

One of the best rewards for a person writing poetry is when somebody relates to your work. Leonard
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 3 months ago

Leonard...

How could I have missed this head-swelling event... loved it my poet friend... Richard
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leonard daranjo

17 years 3 months ago

Thanks Richard

I am really happy you liked this piece. I always seem to get across to you. That's the best part about sharing. Your friend ... Leonard
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 2 months ago

Space

A strong message here Leonard, thank you for sharing~ I enjoyed this piece ______________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous