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Other Victims

Other Victims I’ve lived a verysheltered, and fortunate life,no doubt.I’ve lived isolatedfrom the many problems of the world.To the east and the westthere is water;to the north, Canada,whom we call an ally.Perhaps there is troublestirring in the south;time will tell. 
  1. Petrivna
 Petrivna was a youngUkrainian girlwhen the Germans invadedin ’41.I never met her,only read about her in the news.She was not a Nazi,nor a collaborator.She was not a Jew,Gypsy, or protestor.Petrivna fellin the “in between” category;useful for work,not death.Young Petrivna’s jobduring the occupation was towalk on top the bodiespiled in the pit graves,to make room for more victims.Petrivna was in fourth grade,when she walked over top her classmate,another young Ukrainian girlwho remained nameless in the article I read.Petrivna and her friendare both victims in their way.    In my land of opportunity,in the milk and honey stateI wonder how many peoplehave never had a name.I wonder how many peopleare faceless, holed upin cellars, in vaults,in the brothels, and the fields. 
  1. Igor Perchov
 Igor servedin the army of Ukraine.When his unit was capturedIgor was lined against a brick wallalong with the rest of his men.When the bullets sprayed,and the soldiers fellIgor lay motionless for two daysunder the stench of his comrades.When he felt safe enough to moveIgor walked awayfrom the village,changed his name,and deserted the army.He too,is another type of victim. 
  1. Safran and Alex
 Safran hired Igorsixty years later,not knowing his history.Safran’s grandfatherhad gotten a youngUkrainian Jew pregnant,and he wanted to find outwhat happened to her.Igor reluctantly agreedat the behest of his grandson Alexto give Safran a tour of Ukraine.When they found the womanwho would have been Safran’s auntshe led them to a small fieldwith a nearby creek.She told aboutthe day the village was invaded;when Safran’s grandfatherwouldn’t spit on her sister a soldier put the muzzleof a Luger in her belly,then made him and his comradesdig the pit.This revelationmade Igor slit his wrists,as he recognized the womanwhose sister’s grave he helped dig.Until then, even Alex had no ideahis Grandpa was a soldier.Safran found his bodyin a hotel bathtub,blood streaming ontothe tile floor.In his own waySafran, too, is a victim. In sixty years,in six millennia,in a million years or morehow many people lay under the ground, unknown?How many are hiddenby history, their names and faces forgotten? 
  1. Without names
 In the fields of Europe,and under the land and hillsof Iraq, of Israel.In Palestine, and Chileand Columbia;how deep do these people lay?if bones have names,if names have meaning,and if a person’s life has meaningwithout a name,to whom is that person’s value?when bone becomes dust,when dust becomes dirt,when history and familyand genealogy crumblewho will remember them?goodnight, Petrivna,goodnight Igor,and to those of the Ukrainewhose name’s I’ll never know,goodnight.   
— Conect11, Feb 01, 2009

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Conect11

17 years 4 months ago

yes I know it's long...

your choice to read it or not, lol. Mark W. Galatians 5:22-23 "22 But the Holy Spirit produces this kind of fruit in our lives: love, joy, peace, patience, kindness, goodness, faithfulness, 23 gentleness, and self-control. Against these, there is no law!" My favorite verse(s) in the Bible
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themoonman

17 years 4 months ago

Mark...

it is long but never once lost my interest... well written piece... loved the individual stories, made it a much more personal piece... Your love and disdain for humanity is showing, and what poet cannot feel both extremes? this is a five star poem... I've not been voting since the big voting/rating debate... but this my friend needs to be read by more than me... Richard
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Conect11

17 years 4 months ago

thank you kindly Richard

your words mean quite a bit to me, on this and in everything you have written. I've been thinking more recently on the plight of the unknown, what the individual history of a person is and the article I read about Petrivna stirred all of that up. Mark W. Galatians 5:22-23 "22 But the Holy Spirit produces this kind of fruit in our lives: love, joy, peace, patience, kindness, goodness, faithfulness, 23 gentleness, and self-control. Against these, there is no law!" My favorite verse(s) in the Bible
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 4 months ago

Mark...

and to me your feelings are another feather for you as a thinking feeling being... My own thoughts on the individual knowings... we are but mere-mortals... if we truly knew every individual's pain, we would most assuredly burst from within... just the little we do know causes quakes to tremor... and to me, it is a grand sign for humanity! please do keep getting stirred up... Richard
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Lonnie

17 years 4 months ago

Beautifully penned, Mark!

Your Story/Poem flows well even between the parts! nice imagery, good use of language and fantastic flow throughout! Kudos!
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Conect11

17 years 4 months ago

thank you Lonnie

it's always a privilege to have you read my work, I am humbled. Mark W. Galatians 5:22-23 "22 But the Holy Spirit produces this kind of fruit in our lives: love, joy, peace, patience, kindness, goodness, faithfulness, 23 gentleness, and self-control. Against these, there is no law!" My favorite verse(s) in the Bible
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Quillsvein1

17 years 4 months ago

i've got to

see that movie, but I'm sure you've encapsulated the best parts of it in this poem which touches on a question all must have at some point or another: what about the victims we now nothing about it? all the ossuaries, all the burnt ashes, all the graveyards we pass by? THIS is a quest of conscience by a real Christian, and I wish I'd written it: it touches on a metaphysical question I've had forever but never had the guts to name in ink! *Awesome* write. GB
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Conect11

17 years 4 months ago

no,

that movie is far more than I could put into words. It is both sad, and hilariously funny. One of my favorite five films of all time. RUN, don't walk to see it. Mark W. Galatians 5:22-23 "22 But the Holy Spirit produces this kind of fruit in our lives: love, joy, peace, patience, kindness, goodness, faithfulness, 23 gentleness, and self-control. Against these, there is no law!" My favorite verse(s) in the Bible
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Rett

17 years 4 months ago

Oh My Mark

The life you gave to these people is surreal in the intensity. I have often wondered about the unknowns from back then and even farther back in history. I among millions of others have often wondered about Ann Frank also. What happened to her. How many lives are uncounted for in our struggles here at home. The first colonies, the revolution, the other wars. All senseless yet also standing to be counted. Oh man, you got my mind going! Well done. 5/5 Respectfully, Rett: "Next time you think you're perfect, walk on water."
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Conect11

17 years 4 months ago

Thanks Rett,

your words always mean a great deal to me. Whether on our own soil, or anywhere in the world there's the story of the unknown victims, all who had histories, families, and homes. Then there's the people whom never even saw the light of day, those raised in to slavery, war, and God knows what else. I wonder if those people have even ever been given names, if they ever were even recorded into history. There's a great organization, International Justice Mission, that tries to help those people who are still living with these things: http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=vids.individual&videoid=17952993 Mark W. Galatians 5:22-23 "22 But the Holy Spirit produces this kind of fruit in our lives: love, joy, peace, patience, kindness, goodness, faithfulness, 23 gentleness, and self-control. Against these, there is no law!" My favorite verse(s) in the Bible