Terrorism Speaks Itself!

Terrorism Speakes ITSELF Some of its spelling is getting in the way of the understanding of it ! The spellings you can look up to make this correct and very good unless you want help with that? Not sure one needs to be so correct always with punctuation in poetry you could almost cut it all out unless there is something in the centre of a line that would be make it misunderstood What a good idea, and well put too. Refrain from all....? Good rythm of its own the theme is good too the beginning and end good too consistent yes I am no expert but that's my bit! Yours Ann of Norway

the power and poignancy you express are spot on. As Anne pointed out, you might want to look at some spelling; ie.,"itself" instead of "itslef," "terrorism" instead of "terrorsim," "destination" instead of "distination," "Religions" instead of "Relegions," etc. That said, the spelling didn't get in the way for me. Your words echo true, especially when you say killing the terrorist won't stop the problem. Humanity's attitude towards one another must change on a wholesale level before the disease is eradicated. There are plenty of people, not just the "terrorists," but those in power as well who want nothing to do with that. You see, it's my opinion that the cure will not be found in the governments, nor in the powerful. The cure will come despite them, it will start with the people, the humble, the Godly. And by Godly I don't mean a particular religion, I mean by those who seek the true face of God, which is love, peace, patience, etc. We are all made of the same flesh, bone, and blood, in His image. When people start to see that, they relate to each other. Mark W. Galatians 5:22-23 "22 But the Holy Spirit produces this kind of fruit in our lives: love, joy, peace, patience, kindness, goodness, faithfulness, 23 gentleness, and self-control. Against these, there is no law!" My favorite verse(s) in the Bible

I like this one and it has a little truth to it. Terrorism does speak for itself. It is odd that it is not only prevalent in religions, but in the non-religious as well. It boils down to a thirst for power mostly. Vengeance is a tool in the thirst for power. Religion becomes a tool in the thirst for power and hatred of religion become a tool in the thirst for power. If we could cure the thirst we would be in much better shape. Very thought provoking poem. btw. I have the flu also so know exactly how you feel. Well done Wafi. Well done indeed. Respectfully, Rett: "Next time you think you're perfect, walk on water."

Is the “E” of “Enemity” (enmity) Hatred and perversity. (I wonder if you might consider using "polemics" rather than "perversity"? It seems more in keeping with the idea of this stanza and still maintains some rhyme.) (Great stanza!) Respect others integrity . . . (others') For one is the origin. (I don't think this is a sentence so I would either change it to "One is the origin." or leave off the period.) (I also really liked this stanza.) The “O” of ”Terrorism” . . . "Opression" Is the ”I” of “Illitracy” (Illiteracy) (Hmmm . . . I think your poem would be stronger without the interruption of this mini-lecture here.) If the billions of dollars wasted . . . (Same here) Let all of us refrain from . . . By killing the diseased (need a comma here) If the causes are not fought, This war cannot be won. We’ll not reach destination, (our destination) However fast we run. Final thought: since you're using the letters in "terrorism," I'd be inclined to stick with them in number and order (R, O). Maybe cut a couple of stanzas? Great job!

Illiteracy X2 as arrow pointed out otherwise it is now fine. Good poem. Yours Ann of Norway.

Wafi, Thought provoking piece here. I enjoyed it , you did a great job. Arrow had some great suggestions. Thank you for sharing~Way to go! ______________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous

I´m way behind with my reading...your title caught my attention days ago, but time was in short supply. I am ever so glad to have caught up with this one, brilliant idea, well thought out! Yours, ~Nina P.S. "millitancy"->"militancy"?

A well-deserved congratulations. --Arrow

on a hard earned and well deserved spotlight! Mark W. Galatians 5:22-23 "22 But the Holy Spirit produces this kind of fruit in our lives: love, joy, peace, patience, kindness, goodness, faithfulness, 23 gentleness, and self-control. Against these, there is no law!" My favorite verse(s) in the Bible

Congratulations on Spotlight! Well deserved! Respectfully, Rett: "Next time you think you're perfect, walk on water." If government is the answer, it's a stupid question!

More true than most care to admit, and on so many different levels. How many of those nouns you've used are terrorism, in one way or another? All. Love the title, very expressive of the rest of the piece. Your language use cannot be faulted. Although you obviously had some spelling errors in there at first, who cares? You nailed the meaning anyway, this is obvious. The rhythm is wonderful. The beginning was strong, if expected. Terrorism and tyranny are the two sides of the same evil coin in my book. The ending is fantastic, wraps everything up neatly and powerfully. As for the theme...lol...tell you what, let's start sending this to all of our so-called leaders, shall we? I think it would make all of them pause and at least think, don't you? An impressive write, 5 stars man Respectfully Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race

A poem of richness, to the least.

Well it has been said, but I wanted to add my little bit... I wondered what the poem would speak on when I read the name & was really happy to find the content expressed... Well done Wafi. Hope you feel better soon too. Anni I wish to walk gracefully..... so as not to spill water.

Sorry I was busy, couldn't read the poem until now, it really is a great poem, Nice work dude, keep it on. Poetry is a mirror which makes beautiful that which is distorted. ~Percy Shelley, A Defence of Poetry, 1821

Thanks dear, I will try my best to post some, but it will no less than be full of errors, Missing you so much,

But it is good that you have your opinions. I pay taxes so I feel that in some ways I am what you speak of, as the government I pay with my taxes tortures people, impoverishes them, takes rights away under false pretenses, and preaches democracy all while doing so. Good ol Amuuurica. The acrostic poem is a difficult convention as it can sometimes belabor its point but you do it fairly well, albeit there are times where I feel it is repetitive. Overall, an interesting piece, with excellent vocabulary, however I feel that in the end, you contradict your message by being polemic on the other extreme. Ex: “Terrorism” is a disease, Terrorists the diseased. By killing the diseased, The risk will not decrease." Keep writing, I appreciate your willingness to delve into such strong subject matter PS. you may find this an intriguing read, a timeline of CIA activities by Ex-CIA operative Steve Kangas... http://www.serendipity.li/cia/cia_time.htm

Greetings, Wafi! I have read your poem with interest. I appreciate the passion you reveal.Though I concur with the sentiment I cannot comment positively. It reminded me of football matches where cheerleaders are screaming out the name of the team. Thus, the important issues became trivialized. Your manner of placing the poem on the page and the capitalizations virtually screech out. I think this poem need heft. It does read like a rant but might benefit from toning down and put together longer lines. I suggest a more nuanced re-write. Keep well.

Greetings, Wafi! I have read your poem with interest. I appreciate the passion you reveal.Though I concur with the sentiment I cannot comment positively. It reminded me of football matches where cheerleaders are screaming out the name of the team. Thus, the important issues became trivialized. Your manner of placing the poem on the page and the capitalizations virtually screech out. I think this poem needs heft. It does read like a rant but might benefit from toning down and putting together longer lines. I suggest a more stringent, nuanced re-write. I look forward to your re-write. Keep well.