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Metamorphose - A Sonnet

These blighted words rain down from angry lips

Like flying poisoned arrows meant to wound,

And whispers hold my ego in their grips

Intents of venom efforts now attuned.

 

I struggle weakly with these words of pain

To ward off verbal arrows from sharp tongue,

But I find these efforts to be in vain

This inner battle is not often won.

 

How can I conquer this unruly beast?

To calm the anger burning in my chest,

And find unwilling prisoner released

To finally find I have passed this test.

 

I must let gentle wisdom lead my soul

And grant fixed Reason rule of self-control.


— Blue_Halcyon, Jan 31, 2009

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Region, Country: Florida, USA

Favorite Poets: Sylvia Plath, Rumi, Kahlil Gibran, Edgar Allen Poe, Lewis Carrol, Yeats, Bukowski, Langston Hughes, Johanne Wolfgang von Goethe, ect.

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Craig Norris

17 years 4 months ago

Loved the rythme...

Loved the journey...for me... I must let gentle wisdom lead my soul And grant fixed reason rule of self control. (ere anger flashes brightly incandescent Turns to cinders archer and his message.) It may be just a bloke thing...always had a little trouble biting my tongue, and reigning in my anger when poisoned arrows fly. Craig.
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Cajue

17 years 4 months ago

For someone who doesn't..

For someone who doesn't use rhyme often, you surely employed it with ease. This is a Shakespearean sonnet is it not? I really liked this. Craig and I agree about the biting tongue bit.