Dander

at first I thought this was about me... and then came the dumpster diving... I have not had to resort to that yet... but... alas... the plant I was working in closed down last week, so... it could be my future... dander... great word usage here sir... your pen yet glows! Richard

Very descriptive David. I enjoyed every line describing the life of the homeless in a big city, anywhere. I also loved the title~ ______________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous

the imagery that I receive from reading the poem.

Pretty awesome descriptions.

is close to my own little world, mark! "city dander", i wish i'd come up with that: your cumbersome cart worn rusty/by collective sentimental treasures/how they discard their world/within your reach/trinkets luxuries/you settle for necessities.." how many times i have seen this in and out of the poem: you create a state of mind for me here that is completely disorienting. here it is in the poem, and there outside will be the woman with these trinkets and luxuries in some forgotten shopping cart. one would think you were from the city! nice, dense imagery, tight! great job GB