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Frost Smith
Frost Smith
Jan 30, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

End of the day

Exhausted

Tattered

Sweating brine

 

Would water from lava

Crackle and cleanse

Revealing an old shrine

 

Having outlasted the thunderous cavalcade

Conclude another ordinary day

Listening to parsley, sage, rosemary, and thyme

 

 

— Frost Smith, Jan 30, 2009

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yenti

yenti

17 years 4 months ago

Nice to stop

This sounds like your Highway is very busy out there and you collapse into you secure abode at the end of the day, also sounds like you are not enjoying these days, maybe a move and change is needed, but do wait till the money market is settled LOL. Interested in the Vulcano though. Nice to read, Yours, Ian.T