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Poetry Of Love

Poetry of Love

Love where were you
When I needed you
It’s time to go
Have to leave this place
All alone, I’m forced
To find the strength
To say it’s enough

Have to find myself and
Get free of you
I’m off to a place
Where love is dismissing and
No one seems to know
What I see, but

That’s okay I’m better
Off alone, free of your
Stress pulling me down
Now I fly slowly above
The clouds of demise
In search of new grounds

Battered and tattered
I’m as a bird flung about
In this stormy life
Dipping low toward my failures
The winds beneath my wings
Keep me above the waters
Of destruction
— Barbara Writes, Jan 30, 2009

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Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins, Shakespeare, , Emily Dickinson, , , Whitman, Jess Tapper

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yenti

yenti

17 years 4 months ago

Barbara

This is not supposed to be lonely, as it is a piece that cries from those feelings we are not alowed to feel, or we will be called weak, where it is from ,if from your ways then to go fly free, there are not many that do so. If from the poet, it is a great insight to what a lot of ladies have to go through in their lives, I am sorry that all cannot be sorted, but life is to learn lessons and some are damned hard. I have just upgraded reply to a rage I would like your vioew on that one please. With my best respects, Ian.T