A Tulip is Only, but a Flower has been selected for publication @ Triond.com

A Tulip is only, but a Flower

Has been selected for publication @ Triond.com

http://authspot.com/poetry/a-tulip-is-only-but-a-flower/

A thought by Sinbad the Sailor Man

— Sinbadthesailorman, Jan 28, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: U.S. A. Indiana, Valparaiso, USA

Favorite Poets: Robert Frost, Walt Whitman, Samuel Taylor Coleridge, Carl Sandburg these I have read some And so Many More. I have no Favorite or any that I dislike. Whom I consider to be poets; of course there are many Dark and hateful souls, who would cry out and to I will lend an ear, but some. They just leave a awful taste in my heart that I can not bear to read twice. Let alone as many times I would do normally; as I must.

Critiques

yenti

17 years 4 months ago

Tulips

A little confusing in places and needs a bit of an edit to make it either flow or jump out at the reader, theres a lot of good material in this one so lets see what a brush will do, Yours With respect Ian.T

Sinbadthesailorman

17 years 4 months ago

Hi Ian, This is much harder then I first thought it was going

To be. A pro-life friend challenged me to try it. And I thought I could do it but, now I am not so sure if I can. Make it work to my liken, is an important issue to many I know and is An on going debate for some but is something we humans turely need to settle in this new age of ours. Not sure I am up to the challenge. or to influenace anyone's decisions on this. May have to let this one fade away. Donnie/Sinbad

yenti

17 years 2 months ago

Donnie

There was nothing wrong with the substance of this poetry, so I will expect a lot more from your pen before you throw it away LOL. The more you write the better you will become, and as a base you seem to be very strong, and you will suprise yourself one day. Just let it flow then take a deep breath and read it then do a little edit and send, it will be great,Yours Ian.T

Sinbadthesailorman

17 years 2 months ago

This one is tough and I am leaving it to age some

for i am not sure I am worthy to bring it to the fullness it deserves is a hard subject and no one wants to be singled out or become something they are not until they are not sure what that means or entails but its out there far beit from me to be a voice crying in this wilderness Donnie/Sinbad