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Jan 28, 2009
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Hold Your Breath
One kid pulled a gun
in seething rage
and shot the other one
through startled face
holy shit
steer around the body
don't get blood
on my wheels
just hold your breath
and drive on
cops peering
hard-core paranoia
strobing lights
of checkpoint
hunting drunks
hands on weapons
flashlights pointed at suspicion
behind steamed windows
slow it down
but keep it moving
keep looking ahead
just hold your breath
and drive on
little sweetness
all dolled up
for dark and johns
tight curls strutting stuff
for sale
beside abandoned steel mill
don't slow down
at the corner
lock the goddam doors
fifteen'll get you twenty and
she's all of twelve years old
just hold your breath
and drive on
That one used to
have a home and family
but now he's only got
a habit and scarred arms
selling shit to one and all
Keep the windows up
"No thanks man,
we don't want none!"
just hold your breath
and drive on
speed it up
don't stop here
at the light
that one's got a gun
and wants the car
so floor it
and fucking duck
just hold your breath
and drive on
keep going
don't look
don't slow
don't care
don't stop
don't fucking think
It'll be okay
it's not too close
to where we live
not yet
just hold your breath
and drive on
— Race_9togo, Jan 28, 2009
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Critiques
Race_9togo
17 years 4 months ago
Thanks
infinite_dwarf
17 years 4 months ago
Jim
Race_9togo
17 years 4 months ago
LOL
Race_9togo
17 years 4 months ago
LOL
Janice Pearce
17 years 4 months ago
Hold Your Breath
Race_9togo
17 years 4 months ago
Thanbks Janice
Arrow
17 years 4 months ago
Makes me feel guilty,
Race_9togo
17 years 4 months ago
Arrow
deelilah
17 years 4 months ago
I held my breath
Race_9togo
17 years 4 months ago
That's all we can do, keep going
Race_9togo
17 years 4 months ago
Arrow