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Jan 27, 2009
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The Gargoyles' Last Stand
a piece of stone, well formed
on a cloud much too tender
to support the weight burdening it
tonight
it will rain gargoyles
"I don't own an umbrella"
I tell you
and try not to look
too concerned
they will puncture
every sphere of smoke
in this room
it will be their last stand
on a cloud much too tender
to support the weight burdening it
tonight
it will rain gargoyles
"I don't own an umbrella"
I tell you
and try not to look
too concerned
they will puncture
every sphere of smoke
in this room
it will be their last stand
— Proprietress of Crimson Hearts, Jan 27, 2009
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Ink Dragon
17 years 4 months ago
Voila indeed!
Proprietress o…
17 years 4 months ago
oh dear, oh dear,
Stella
17 years 4 months ago
Dear Proprietress, Was just
Proprietress o…
17 years 4 months ago
sweet Stella,
Stella
17 years 4 months ago
You’re absolutely right
yenti
17 years 4 months ago
Crimson heart
Proprietress o…
17 years 4 months ago
Lord Richard of Tablets,
Proprietress o…
17 years 4 months ago
my dear Vampyre,
Kailashana
17 years 4 months ago
Gives a whole new meaning to
Proprietress o…
17 years 4 months ago
Kailashana,
yenti
17 years 4 months ago
Crimson heart
Proprietress o…
17 years 4 months ago
Ian,
Nordic cloud
17 years 4 months ago
Smoke, Clouds and Gargoyles
Ink Dragon
17 years 4 months ago
Ann
Proprietress o…
17 years 4 months ago
oh no, Ann of Norway,
themoonman
17 years 4 months ago
Proprietress...
Proprietress o…
17 years 4 months ago
Mr. Moonman,
Kailashana
17 years 4 months ago
If only every human being on
Proprietress o…
17 years 4 months ago
JD,
Nordic cloud
17 years 4 months ago
Oh no Ann of Norway
Rob Graber
17 years 4 months ago
Look Out Below!
Proprietress o…
17 years 4 months ago
Rob,
youarehere
17 years 4 months ago
Hearts of Stone
Proprietress o…
17 years 4 months ago
Michael,
orgami
17 years 4 months ago
rain soothing the winds of souls come home
Proprietress o…
17 years 4 months ago
Mr. Orgami,
Electric Blue
17 years 4 months ago
The Gargoyls last stand
Proprietress o…
17 years 4 months ago
dankeschön, ElectricBlue!