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leonard daranjo
Jan 30, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Wake of the Soul



when you awakento consciousness, you are a flower in full bloom 

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Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 3 months ago

Great work here

Nice to see your work again, been a minute there. took a break from homework and wow this great piece here waiting for my enjoyment. unconscious now conscious wilted by the burning sun showers of rain brings this flower to full bloom ~~~~~~~~~ Be whoever you are At all times, and Remember that Because of this, people will Always Respect, and Admire you ©2008Leonard Respectfully Yours, Barbara
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 3 months ago

Leonard...

You my friend are very good at the short but picturesque... awakening... excellent choice of words... Richard
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 3 months ago

Wake of the Soul

Leonard, Very nice one here! I could "feel" this one, AND you were not a rebel, and stuck to the 5, 7, 5 LOL! Great Leonard~~ ______________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous